User contributions for 64.124.27.3

1 April 2015

• 21:5721:57, 1 April 2015 diff hist −1 That's My Boy (2012 film) 57 million, not 577 million

23 March 2015

• 23:4423:44, 23 March 2015 diff hist 27 The Bad and the Beautiful →Plot: copy edit

20 March 2015

• 21:5221:52, 20 March 2015 diff hist −16 Water memory →Post-publication supervised experiments: Supplying requested citation.

7 March 2015

• 01:2201:22, 7 March 2015 diff hist −75 Luther Vandross →Voice: Cited sources say only that he was a tenor. Specific octaves and notes appears to be original research.

4 March 2015

• 23:0323:03, 4 March 2015 diff hist 1,834 Talk:Magnolia Shorty No edit summary
• 22:5822:58, 4 March 2015 diff hist −2,329 Magnolia Shorty WP:COPYVIO This entire section is copied verbatim from the newspaper.
• 00:0800:08, 4 March 2015 diff hist −1 Long-Term Capital Management →Downturn: removing comma

30 January 2015

• 21:0321:03, 30 January 2015 diff hist 65 One Potato, Two Potato (film) →Plot

22 January 2015

• 23:4423:44, 22 January 2015 diff hist 2,709 One Potato, Two Potato (film) Adding synopsis

12 January 2015

• 23:2523:25, 12 January 2015 diff hist 17 1972 Olympic men's basketball final →First inbounds play
• 23:1023:10, 12 January 2015 diff hist 177 1972 Olympic men's basketball final No edit summary

22 November 2014

• 02:0702:07, 22 November 2014 diff hist −2 Sam Cooke rv

19 November 2014

• 20:4620:46, 19 November 2014 diff hist 19 Sam Cooke →Death: Moving parenthentical into Notes.

12 November 2014

• 00:1600:16, 12 November 2014 diff hist −148 Deadly Voyage Undid revision 614851284 by Giraffedata (talk) Different names doesn't mean they aren't based on real people. Kingsley, the ship's captain and first mate *are* based on specific real people.

11 November 2014

• 23:5223:52, 11 November 2014 diff hist 408 Sam Cooke Undid revision 633177573 by Tapered (talk) Info was cited. Web URL just needed to be updated.

1 November 2014

• 00:3900:39, 1 November 2014 diff hist 739 Talk:In a Grove →Translation notes section - Original research: new section
• 00:3200:32, 1 November 2014 diff hist 50 In a Grove →Translation notes: Adding original research tag

29 October 2014

• 20:1020:10, 29 October 2014 diff hist −2 Georgia on My Mind →Original version: copy edit

17 October 2014

• 23:1223:12, 17 October 2014 diff hist 113 Unreliable narrator →Films
• 23:0823:08, 17 October 2014 diff hist −807 Unreliable narrator This is not an example of an unreliable narrator. It's just standard operating procedure in serialized fiction (ESPECIALLY in comic books). "Oh, that major character that was 'killed'? Turns out it wasn't really him, but was just a clone/decoy/duplicate."
• 22:3922:39, 17 October 2014 diff hist 20 Atmosphere of Mars →History: Both the linked wiki page and the supporting citation refer to multiple kinds of possible atmosphere loss. So for clarity, being explicit about which one this particular bullet point refers to.

9 October 2014

• 20:2420:24, 9 October 2014 diff hist −236 Rashomon effect Undid revision 628733863 by 24.186.17.237 (talk) The alternate versions are presented only as theories, not as anyone's claim of their being a definitive account of what happened.

1 October 2014

• 20:4220:42, 1 October 2014 diff hist −294 At-will employment →Statutory exceptions: This section is discussing federal statutes and there's no such federal statute. Most states have this protection as part of implied contract, but that's already covered in the above implied contract section.
• 20:3020:30, 1 October 2014 diff hist −131 At-will employment →Covenant of good faith and fair dealing exceptions (aka. "Implied-in-law" Contracts): Removing verbatim reproduction of Muhl's text as WP:COPYVIO. Replacing with a paraphrasing of material from that source

22 September 2014

• 22:3122:31, 22 September 2014 diff hist 9 Dangerous Corner →Plot summary
• 22:0922:09, 22 September 2014 diff hist 38 Dangerous Corner →Film adaptation

19 September 2014

• 22:1322:13, 19 September 2014 diff hist 2,567 Dangerous Corner →Plot summary

16 September 2014

• 22:4222:42, 16 September 2014 diff hist 56 1980 eruption of Mount St. Helens No substantiation provided for claim that there was substantial pressure to re-open it to general public, nor for claim that the closure saved "thousands" of lives.
• 22:3722:37, 16 September 2014 diff hist 66 1980 eruption of Mount St. Helens →Build-up to the eruption

10 September 2014

• 21:5421:54, 10 September 2014 diff hist 191 The Bigamist (1953 film) →Plot
• 21:4721:47, 10 September 2014 diff hist −438 The Bigamist (1953 film) →Plot: Copy edits

25 August 2014

• 21:2921:29, 25 August 2014 diff hist −208 Orca (1977 film) →Plot: Removing editor's personal interpretation of what was "suggested". Camera shows the orca under the ice for maybe 30 seconds. Orcas can stay submerged for 20 minutes and swim a good 3 miles under there just fine.

6 August 2014

• 01:0701:07, 6 August 2014 diff hist −2 A Man Called Adam (film) →Plot

31 July 2014

• 20:2020:20, 31 July 2014 diff hist −28 John Roselius one isn't "many"

25 July 2014

• 20:5220:52, 25 July 2014 diff hist 4 Brown Sugar (2002 film) →Cast
• 19:5219:52, 25 July 2014 diff hist 192 Georgia on My Mind Citation link for claim that it's about his sister is dead and wasn't WP:RS anyway. The ONLY [{WP:RS]] I've found on the subject (namely Carmichael's own words) says it's about the state. If there's a WP:RS saying otherwise, then cite it.

23 July 2014

• 00:4100:41, 23 July 2014 diff hist 542 To Serve Man (short story) →Synopsis
• 00:0700:07, 23 July 2014 diff hist 4 To Serve Man (short story) →Synopsis: The book's actual title, as given in the short story, is "How to Serve Man".

18 July 2014

• 21:3521:35, 18 July 2014 diff hist 211 Sam Cooke Adding a section for notes, replacing the use of parenthetical notes that interrupt the prose.
• 21:1021:10, 18 July 2014 diff hist −524 Neighbors (1981 film) Moving stuff about production into the production section; removing a sentence that is is incoherent.
• 20:5520:55, 18 July 2014 diff hist −1 Neighbors (novel) →Analysis: American spelling

16 July 2014

• 23:1223:12, 16 July 2014 diff hist −107 Great White (1981 film) Removing non-NPOV edits
• 21:3221:32, 16 July 2014 diff hist 0 Stroh Brewery Company →Turnaround and decline
• 21:3121:31, 16 July 2014 diff hist 2 Stroh Brewery Company →Turnaround and decline
• 21:3021:30, 16 July 2014 diff hist −223 Stroh Brewery Company →Turnaround and decline: Re-writing this section because original version is taken word-for-word from an article in The Detroit News. Clear WP:COPYVIO

11 July 2014

• 02:5302:53, 11 July 2014 diff hist 211 Talk:Breakaway (Space: 1999) →Plot summary: new section

2 July 2014

• 23:3323:33, 2 July 2014 diff hist −31 Deadly Voyage Does the book have anything to do with this film?

27 June 2014

• 00:0400:04, 27 June 2014 diff hist 5 Hawaiian sovereignty movement →Forms: Not sure what this sentence was trying to say; making my best guess

10 June 2014

• 22:2322:23, 10 June 2014 diff hist −12 Shondrella Avery Not sure what is meant by saying she lives in "the California area". California is pretty big and has well-defined borders; any given location where one might live is either in California or it isn't.

6 June 2014

• 21:5121:51, 6 June 2014 diff hist −109 Revolt in the Stars →Development: Removing this one sentence, since it basically just repeats, as a one-sentence summary, the information already laid out (in more detail) in the paragraph.