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13 October 2015

• 21:4921:49, 13 October 2015 diff hist −22 Poisoned candy myths →Historical, factual origins: See immediately preceding edit summary
• 21:4821:48, 13 October 2015 diff hist 54 Poisoned candy myths →Historical, factual origins: Clarifying opening sentence. I know I am coining "tampered" as an adjectival form of the verb, and am doing so intentionally. (The language needs such a sentence-simplifying form.) Le Prof
• 21:4321:43, 13 October 2015 diff hist 1,224 Poisoned candy myths →Further reading: Added Current reports section, to add credibility to the fairness of the article.
• 21:3521:35, 13 October 2015 diff hist −20 Poisoned candy myths →Best sociological research: trimming down Best intro, since already intro's above
• 21:3221:32, 13 October 2015 diff hist 720 Poisoned candy myths →Historical, factual origins: Sourcing and filling details of one historical story. The closing sentence bears a "so what?" tag.
• 21:0721:07, 13 October 2015 diff hist 362 Talk:Poisoned candy myths →Noting significant problems remaining, even after significant work
• 21:0221:02, 13 October 2015 diff hist −1 Poisoned candy myths →Philosophical considerations: Copyedit, removing stray comma
• 21:0121:01, 13 October 2015 diff hist −11 Poisoned candy myths →Philosophical considerations: slight touch up of new section
• 20:5920:59, 13 October 2015 diff hist 1,232 Poisoned candy myths →History: Adding prove a negative statement from best, and giving scope of his work. Will remove his fill name later as redundant.
• 20:4720:47, 13 October 2015 diff hist 363 Poisoned candy myths →Social causes: Adding further reading section and citation.
• 20:3920:39, 13 October 2015 diff hist 192 User talk:LordAtlas →See article: new section
• 20:3820:38, 13 October 2015 diff hist 2,879 Talk:Poisoned candy myths →Noting significant problems remaining, even after significant work: new section
• 20:1820:18, 13 October 2015 diff hist 18 Poisoned candy myths noting Kawash as popular rather than scholarly source (i.e., with derivations unknown)
• 20:1720:17, 13 October 2015 diff hist 4 Poisoned candy myths Editing to create two paths for expertise, sociology and history. Le Prof
• 20:1620:16, 13 October 2015 diff hist 365 Poisoned candy myths No edit summary
• 20:1320:13, 13 October 2015 diff hist 91 Poisoned candy myths →Media roles: Noting how impossible it is to view this opening, absent sources, because of broad nature of claims, and apparent incongruities. The may have teased out the nuances here; we have not.
• 20:0820:08, 13 October 2015 diff hist 266 Poisoned candy myths →Media roles: Edited tag to be accurate to issue.
• 19:5819:58, 13 October 2015 diff hist 138 Poisoned candy myths Editing to move toward encyclopedic. Conservative edit, keeping all factual content. **Again, primary source for event is insufficient as sole source if interpreting. Noted opening sentences nearing puffery/weasel, and without sources. Le Prof
• 19:5019:50, 13 October 2015 diff hist 21 Poisoned candy myths →Social causes: Again, noting source.
• 19:4919:49, 13 October 2015 diff hist 7 Poisoned candy myths →Debunking the myths
• 19:4919:49, 13 October 2015 diff hist −5 Poisoned candy myths →No deaths due to stranger poisoning: Removing argument/argumentative construction from heading
• 19:4719:47, 13 October 2015 diff hist 26 Poisoned candy myths →Debunking the myths: Clarifying content as derived from previously mentioned expert.
• 19:4519:45, 13 October 2015 diff hist 2 Poisoned candy myths →Development of the modern myth: copyedit, added missing indefinite article
• 19:4519:45, 13 October 2015 diff hist 6 Poisoned candy myths →Historical, factual origins: Noting that the 1964 Long Island story is unsourced.
• 19:4319:43, 13 October 2015 diff hist −21 Poisoned candy myths Adding expert needed tag, to bring in an Am cultural historian with the relevant expertise. Le Prof
• 19:4119:41, 13 October 2015 diff hist 391 Poisoned candy myths No edit summary
• 19:3119:31, 13 October 2015 diff hist 60 Poisoned candy myths Noting that Joel Best U of C book needs page numbers. Note, earlier Kawash tag indicated page number rage (27-72) is either in error, or too broad.
• 19:2319:23, 13 October 2015 diff hist −239 Poisoned candy myths Combined redundant Kawash refs, per WP policy, using rp markup; feel free to migrate to other style/format, like bibliography and short reference, but this was the one I know, and fast.
• 19:1419:14, 13 October 2015 diff hist 313 Poisoned candy myths Distinction made between citing events, versus interpreting those events. LATTER STATEMENTS NEEDS SOURCES. Separated hist'ical/factual fr myth citns. Noted interpretations of myth citns done by editor, need 2ndary sources.
• 19:0419:04, 13 October 2015 diff hist 257 User talk:WhatamIdoing →Tech News: 2015-42
• 19:0119:01, 13 October 2015 diff hist 389 User talk:Froid →You might look in on: new section
• 18:5818:58, 13 October 2015 diff hist −1 R&D intensity →By countries and regions: Copyedit of source content
• 18:5718:57, 13 October 2015 diff hist −30 R&D intensity →Definition and aim of metric: Added page, so page needed tag could be removed.
• 18:5618:56, 13 October 2015 diff hist 702 R&D intensity →Definition and aim of metric: Moved basic definition up in page.
• 18:5518:55, 13 October 2015 diff hist −555 R&D intensity →By countries and regions: Moving definition sentence up.
• 18:4918:49, 13 October 2015 diff hist 247 R&D intensity →Definition and aim of metric: Definition moved here.
• 18:4718:47, 13 October 2015 diff hist −74 R&D intensity →In enterprises and companies: Moving definition sentence up
• 18:4118:41, 13 October 2015 diff hist 854 Talk:R&D intensity No edit summary
• 18:3618:36, 13 October 2015 diff hist 699 R&D intensity Began improving the lead (moving the key cited definition sentence up into it). Created Definition and aim section. Moved citations into main body, repeating text as necessary. Corrected and completed opening 1990 article presentation in the textbook.
• 16:5216:52, 13 October 2015 diff hist 179 R&D intensity Correcting tags, removing URL issue
• 16:3816:38, 13 October 2015 diff hist 28 R&D intensity →R&D intensity by countries and regions: Copyedit of previous reference
• 16:3716:37, 13 October 2015 diff hist 374 R&D intensity →R&D intensity by countries and regions: Repaired and completed the OECD citation
• 16:2116:21, 13 October 2015 diff hist 24 R&D intensity →R&D intensity for enterprises and companies: Replaced poor source/dead link.
• 16:1316:13, 13 October 2015 diff hist 23 R&D intensity →R&D intensity by countries and regions: Edit to citation
• 16:1116:11, 13 October 2015 diff hist −4 R&D intensity →R&D intensity by countries and regions: Fixed dead link
• 16:0516:05, 13 October 2015 diff hist 13 R&D intensity for obvious reasons