User contributions for 24.223.207.5

1 November 2016

• 20:4920:49, 1 November 2016 diff hist 10 Template:Latest preview software release/Pale Moon Updated release version

4 October 2016

• 16:1616:16, 4 October 2016 diff hist −2 The Bard's Tale (1985 video game) →Sequels: Grammar: Commas, conjunctions, and rephrasing redundant and poorly considered sentence structures sum up my edit.
• 16:0416:04, 4 October 2016 diff hist 2 The Bard's Tale (1985 video game) →Sequels: Grammar: Changed irrelevant to unrelated.

14 September 2016

• 15:1215:12, 14 September 2016 diff hist 378 User talk:Leo1pard →Don't worry about comments on my talk page: Send Leo my regards ;)
• 15:0215:02, 14 September 2016 diff hist −412 User talk:24.223.207.5 →The picture's age has nothing to do with when they reportedly became extinct

11 September 2016

• 15:0515:05, 11 September 2016 diff hist 0 Caspian tiger Altered "20th century" to "19th century" as the image shown depicts a Tiger in Berlin zoo dated 1899.

26 August 2016

• 15:4315:43, 26 August 2016 diff hist 21 Primecoin →Proof-of-work system: Updated the reference to the new link, website was redesigned; I had to find the old link by searching the new website layout.

22 August 2016

• 20:0820:08, 22 August 2016 diff hist −4 KickassTorrents →Arrest of the alleged owner: Changed "drug marketplace" to "black market" to be more comprehensive as to Silk Road's definition
• 18:1318:13, 22 August 2016 diff hist 1 History of submarines →Early submarines: Changed "Cornelis" to "Cornelius", "if" to "of", and added a comma after "Hence it is not impossible...". Grammar corrections
• 17:4217:42, 22 August 2016 diff hist 3 History of submarines →Early submarines: Changed "aquitance" to "acquaintance", acquittance is improperly used grammar.

6 August 2016

• 18:1218:12, 6 August 2016 diff hist −11 Life extension →Strategies for Engineered Negligible Senescence (SENS): Removed "removal of" as it contradicted the source information as well as the intent of SENS (i.e., telomere lengthening is proposed to increase lifespan, yet this section claims the opposite).

29 July 2016

• 15:1315:13, 29 July 2016 diff hist −7 Rhus typhina →Description: Removed "(fall)" because the word autumn needs no clarification.

8 July 2016

• 00:1000:10, 8 July 2016 diff hist −1 Video games and Linux →Available middleware: Grammar: "targets" to "target"

20 June 2016

• 15:1015:10, 20 June 2016 diff hist 0 Cerebral cortex →Thickness: Changed increased to decreased to reflect what phenomena the writer attempted to convey. A typo, I believe.
• 14:3914:39, 20 June 2016 diff hist 12 Neanderthal →Interbreeding with modern humans: This section must have been writ by a "Neandertal" because that's how they spelled Neanderthal. A human fixed it.

19 June 2016

• 20:3920:39, 19 June 2016 diff hist 2 Powerlet Added variability in sizes of canisters for sale. I don't know to what extent they vary, but judging by what's for sale and writ on the internet, I know at the very least there to exist 8 gram and 12 gram sizes. Still needs good sources.
• 20:3520:35, 19 June 2016 diff hist 0 Powerlet Fixed grammar of previous edit.
• 20:3520:35, 19 June 2016 diff hist 51 Powerlet Added information regarding colloquial naming. CO2 chargers are a common name in the rest of Wikipedia and the English speaking realm.

18 June 2016

• 16:0016:00, 18 June 2016 diff hist −19 2,4,5-Trichlorophenoxyacetic acid Removed "(Vietnam Conflict)" which was included after "Vietnam War" as if it were still not considered a war.

17 June 2016

• 16:5716:57, 17 June 2016 diff hist 5 Kenaf →Kenaf seed oil: Corrected an uncited statement claiming "omega PUFAs which are now known to help in keeping humans healthy" which was biased.

6 June 2016

• 16:0616:06, 6 June 2016 diff hist 240 Ubuntu Clarified the introductory section concerning Windows 10 and the compatibility with Bash after reading the source linked.

28 May 2016

• 15:0415:04, 28 May 2016 diff hist 186 United States raw milk debate →Pathogens and public health concerns: Clarified that the source listed only found correlative evidence, yet causative evidence is lacking.

7 May 2016

• 22:1522:15, 7 May 2016 diff hist −798 User talk:24.223.207.5 ←Replaced content with 'No.'
• 19:0819:08, 7 May 2016 diff hist 223 User talk:Sminthopsis84 Full circle communications have commenced and completed.
• 17:4417:44, 7 May 2016 diff hist 2 User talk:Sminthopsis84 →Apologies
• 17:4417:44, 7 May 2016 diff hist 211 User talk:Sminthopsis84 →Apologies: new section

6 May 2016

• 19:0219:02, 6 May 2016 diff hist −904 User talk:24.223.207.5 ←Replaced content with 'No.'
• 17:3817:38, 6 May 2016 diff hist 0 Raspberry Image caption had an improper ordering of the species listed. Looking at each link, I rectified it.

28 April 2016

• 16:1716:17, 28 April 2016 diff hist −8 Gold-containing drugs Replaced "the first" with "contemporary" Roman and Greek use is well documented. Someone should attempt to find the first reports and research into effects on humans from historical sources.

27 April 2016

• 14:4514:45, 27 April 2016 diff hist 5 Foxconn →Working conditions: They removed NEARLY half his brain, according to the article.
• 14:4414:44, 27 April 2016 diff hist 22 Foxconn →Working conditions: Added additional information from the sources cited.
• 14:2314:23, 27 April 2016 diff hist −2 Foxconn →Controversies: Changed "Amputate" to "Remove

26 April 2016

• 16:5016:50, 26 April 2016 diff hist 2 Optical disc drive Replaced 'available' with 'commonplace'.
• 16:1716:17, 26 April 2016 diff hist −2,063 User talk:24.223.207.5 ←Replaced content with 'No.'
• 15:5815:58, 26 April 2016 diff hist 0 Dead or Alive (franchise) Present to Past tense grammar corrections.

24 April 2016

• 17:1217:12, 24 April 2016 diff hist −7 Dihydrotestosterone →Pathology: Further grammatical corrections.
• 17:1017:10, 24 April 2016 diff hist 38 Dihydrotestosterone →Pathology: Edited misleading information. The edit now supports the cited material.

19 April 2016

• 18:4018:40, 19 April 2016 diff hist −2 Clove →History: Grammatical errors corrected.

15 March 2016

• 17:4717:47, 15 March 2016 diff hist 0 Labyrinth →Ancient labyrinths outside Europe: Grammatical errors rectified.

27 February 2016

• 17:2317:23, 27 February 2016 diff hist 0 Manjaro →Variants: Moved reference into quotes.
• 17:2217:22, 27 February 2016 diff hist 11 Manjaro →Variants: Added quote marks borrowing code from page examples above.
• 17:2017:20, 27 February 2016 diff hist 1 Manjaro →Variants
• 17:2017:20, 27 February 2016 diff hist 2 Manjaro →Variants: Due to the length of the quoted material, I thought it best to move it to its own line.
• 17:1917:19, 27 February 2016 diff hist 15 Manjaro →Variants: Grammar and diction choices to ease readability.
• 17:1517:15, 27 February 2016 diff hist 1,032 Manjaro →Variants: Added information regarding issues experience by Manjaro users.

17 February 2016

• 19:0319:03, 17 February 2016 diff hist 3 Quaternary glaciation →Next glacial period: Grammatical changes to ease readability of the Article.
• 19:0019:00, 17 February 2016 diff hist −86 Quaternary glaciation →Next glacial period: Removed dubious, unproven, and biased interpretation of the causes for rising CO2 levels. This was slanted towards anthropogenic causes whilst ignoring multifactoral, natural processes known to contribute as well.

14 February 2016

• 14:0814:08, 14 February 2016 diff hist 0 Manjaro 15.12 version on the caption was wrong according to image itself. Changed to 15.09

29 January 2016

• 04:0804:08, 29 January 2016 diff hist 47 Torment: Tides of Numenera →Release: Revising information to current developments

19 January 2016

• 15:4115:41, 19 January 2016 diff hist 0 Remington R51 →Production problems: Changed the wording for less ambiguity.