User talk:Krasmussen010/sandbox

I have a question. As I rewrite this work to make it more reader friendly, do I keep the citations the other person used? Or do I insert more citations? I'm having a problem with the general lack of citations in this article. I am adding citations to content I generate on my own. Any advice?Keri R. (talk) 17:17, 22 September 2018 (UTC) I think I figured it out... but would like a review of any glaring errors. Keri R. (talk) 23:18, 23 September 2018 (UTC)

Stephanie's Peer Review

I believe you're supposed to add citations to the existing work where you are able.

You did an excellent job of updating and providing citations to the article!

My only note of encouragement would be a few grammatical/typing errors and a desire for a little more fluidity. I know the latter is easier said that done when editing and adding!

Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Samartin1024 (talk • contribs) 21:23, 24 September 2018 (UTC)

Thank you Stephanie for your advice. This is a lot to manage. I found it difficult to edit this as I couldn't grasp the original writer's intent and the tone was a bit off or outdated perhaps. I work on the errors. Keri R. (talk) 12:58, 25 September 2018 (UTC)