Talk:Symbiosis (Star Trek: The Next Generation)

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Did anyone else notice the distinct antidrug message with the conversation between Yarr and Wesley? —Preceding unsigned comment added by 74.183.56.244 (talk) 18:23, 5 June 2009 (UTC)

The one that was about as subtle as a herd of stampeding elephants? Nah, didn't notice it. :-) Johnmc (talk) 04:44, 15 August 2009 (UTC)

GA Review

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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 00:14, 23 March 2013 (UTC)

I'll try to get around to this tomorrow. Glimmer721 ^talk 00:14, 23 March 2013 (UTC)

Ack, I totally forgot about this. Sorry about that. Here are my comments:

• "the 22nd episode" → "the twenty-second episode", maybe? I'm not sure what the standard for Star Trek is, though the latter seems more professional to me.

• No problem, changed to twenty-second episode as suggested. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• "The episode was written after executive producer Maurice Hurley worked on Miami Vice." Mention why this is significant in terms of the episode.

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• Maybe put the date after Wrath of Khan in parenthesis (in both the lead and "production")

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• "The Enterprise crew attempts to transport the crew" Clarify who the second crew is ("the freighter's crew")

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• Link narcotic?

• Done. Also added it to the lead, and linked it there. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• ""Symbiosis" was filmed after "Skin of Evil", which featured the death of Tasha Yar. However, this was the final filmed appearance of Denise Crosby..." "However" is better replaced by a semicolon (linking the sentences) because the second sentence follows logically from the first: nothing is contradicted.

• Fixed as noted. Miyagawa (talk) 20:13, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• I'd move the Reading Rainbow sentence to the end of the paragraph

• Done. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• "Michelle Erica Green for TrekNation thought that the episode could have been better, partly due to the quality of the guest cast." The two clauses aren't quite linked. Maybe "...thought that the episode could have been better if the guest cast was up to a better quality".

• Changed as noted. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• "..several TNG series one writing errors..." season one, we're American :)

• Fixed as noted. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• Troi and Riker need to be linked; they haven't been mentioned at all previously in the article

• Linked. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• IGN in the final ref doesn't need to be italicized; it's not a print source

• Fixed. Miyagawa (talk) 20:09, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• By the way, my edits trying to put the appropriate quotation marks in the navbox were reverted again...

• Flipped back to your version. Looks like the standard format for those templates. Miyagawa (talk) 20:13, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

Hm, I don't think I every saw this episode. Anyway, great work as always, with only minor concerns. On hold for 7 days. It's great to see these episodes getting some attention. Glimmer721 ^talk 00:31, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

All right, happy to pass this one now. Glimmer721 ^talk 16:35, 28 March 2013 (UTC)