Talk:Ryoko Kui

Latest comment: 6 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic Did you know nomination

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Previous articles used "Ryōko" with a macron over the o. This appears to be a less-often used romanization of Kui's given name and per WP:COMMONNAME I have used the more commonly used "Ryoko" as the article title instead. This is in accordance with Yen Press' romanization of her name per: this example. Ornithoptera (talk) 05:01, 7 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 22:16, 1 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by Ornithoptera (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 30 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Ornithoptera (talk) 05:16, 7 May 2024 (UTC).Reply

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
  • Cited:  
  • Interesting:  
QPQ: Done.

Overall:   Interesting short article; it is well-sourced and well-written. I prefer the original hook over ALT1. My only suggestion is that mangaka should be unlinked per policy on consecutive Wikilinks and changed to "manga artist" for clarity's sake. Yue🌙 23:07, 14 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Ornithoptera and Yue: What makes the hooks WP:DYKINTeresting?--Launchballer 10:19, 30 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Launchballer: Apologies, I likely missed the absence of an explicit point of general interest because of my own interest in the series. I am unable to word the original hook in a way that is sound and under the character limit. I propose this alteration of ALT1, if you will, ALT2:
... that in addition to her popular manga series Delicious in Dungeon, Ryoko Kui has drawn fan art of the computer role-playing games Baldur's Gate series, Pathfinder and Planescape: Torment?
Marginally better, although I'd expect a more merciless prepbuilder to end it at 'games' and cut the 'the'. I don't plan on promoting any more hooks while there are five hooks in the bottom set, but if you've got anything else, I might as well hear it.--Launchballer 20:26, 30 May 2024 (UTC)Reply