Talk:Politics and Prose/GA1

Latest comment: 12 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 04:56, 28 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 04:56, 28 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Here are the issues I found:

  • Ref #6 (publishers weekly) is a deadlink.
  • "so would be able" so he would
  • "and a number of different book sections." this sounds a little overly vague. different book genres might make it a bit clear, though adding a bit to what is meant would help as well.

A nice read, was a similar bookstore near me back in the day, miss it. Anyway, article's on hold, and I'll pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 03:19, 29 November 2012 (UTC)Reply

Just noticed that the user stopped editing, so I made the fixes myself and am passing the article. Wizardman 00:10, 30 November 2012 (UTC)Reply