Talk:Nils Vogt (journalist)/GA1

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 15:55, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

  • "Amongst his forbears": who is "his" referring to, the on or the father?
  • A lot of people are not going to know that Christiania is Oslo and that Royal Fredrick University is UiO.

I've fixed the two issues and dis some copy-editing, so I'll pass the article. Arsenikk (talk) 15:55, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your copyedit & review. --Eisfbnore talk 18:39, 8 December 2011 (UTC)Reply