Talk:Mr. India (1987 film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 22:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 22:11, 12 May 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• No issues with the non-free use rationale.
• Is there no secondary source for the runtime?

This BBFC link will direct you to a 1988 film of the same name, but the cast is entirely different. So, it must be a different film. I use the version that was provided on YouTube, you can search it by yourself if you want to see it. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 02:31, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

The link --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:13, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "The film's principal photography, which was handled by Baba Azmi, was shot in" → "Principal photography, handled by Baba Azmi, took place in"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 05:59, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Plot and cast

• Plot is under 700 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
• Remove the comma after "ends meet".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:09, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after "Seema, Calendar".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:09, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• No issues with #Cast.

Production

• "consisting Salim Khan" → "consisting of Salim Khan"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "given with the role" → "given the role"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the hyphen between "future-wife".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "choreographer and action director" → "choreographers and action directors"

I have added respectively. --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "character become invisible" → "character invisible"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Recite sources at the end of each quote per WP:QUOTE.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:10, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Everything thing else appears to be properly sourced.

Soundtrack

• "2.5 million cassettes sold according" → "2.5 million cassettes were sold, according"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Add a serial comma after "Aiyyaa (2012)"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Release

• "released in Blu-ray" → "released on Blu-ray"

Removed --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after Pritish Nandy.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Legacy

• Change uses of "..." to "[...]"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "Kapur said".

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• "As parts" → "As part"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Sequel

• "(who died in January 2005) before have affected the production" → "(who died in January 2005) affected the production"

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:11, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

References

• Archive all archivable sources.

Done --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:12, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

• You can't cite Blu-ray.com (#64) per Wikipedia:WikiProject Film/Resources#Questionable resources.

Removed --Nicholas Michael Halim (talk) 06:12, 18 May 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Drive by comments

Which source states that this film is based on The Invisible Man? I thought it is not an adaptation of the novel, except for featuring the protagonist having the powers of invisibility. Kailash29792 (talk) 13:59, 19 May 2021 (UTC)