Talk:Max Besselink

Latest comment: 11 months ago by Lightburst in topic Feedback from New Page Review process

Feedback from New Page Review process

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I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Thanks for the article. Just a note to say we have manuals of style. MOS. You should avoid putting citations in the lead per MOS:LEADCITE and 14 citations is excessive for a one sentence lead.

Lightburst (talk) 15:16, 9 January 2024 (UTC)Reply