Talk:Jim Cullivan/GA1
Latest comment: 1 year ago by WikiOriginal-9 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 08:47, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Notes
edit- Added guards, us army ww2, uni of indiana and appalachian uni faculty cats
- Grove High Schhol isn't linked but is this it or no?
- Looks like it - linked.
- Spell our and link us army.
- Done.
- "returned to his alma mater" Given that his prev coaching job was at a high school it is not obvious that "alma mater" refers to murray state so i suggest just saying alma mater murray state or something.
- Changed.
- "When Murray State head coach" once you adjust the previous sentence, remove murray state from this
- Done.
- "Grove High School, where he attended from 1938–1941" early lif section didn't say that. Suggeest moving it there removing it from the coaching section
- Not sure where I got that - removed the dates as I can't find the source.
- "While there he" comma after there
- Added.
- "undefeated years, and seven" remove comma
- Done.
- "He coached them for one year, and retired" remove comma
- Done.
- any more info on his UPFL stint?
- Didn't find any - league seems pretty obscure.
- "being named assistant at Fulton High School in Kentucky" add in 1949
- Done.
- "was signed by Grove High School" in 1966
- Done.
- "Guilford Quakers as defensive line coach" in 1978
- Done.
- Some of the high schools he coached don't have articles so i dont know where they are.
- Would you like me to try to find their locations?
- if it's not too much work WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:26, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Added them. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:46, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- if it's not too much work WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:26, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- Would you like me to try to find their locations?
- in the lead, "coaching career that spanned over 40 seasons" thats not true
- 1949-1990 is 42 seasons, right?
- there are a few gaps i think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: That's right, but I'm saying it spanned over 40 years, not that he coached all 40. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:46, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- ok, can you change seasons to years WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:48, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Changed. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:49, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- ok, can you change seasons to years WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:48, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: That's right, but I'm saying it spanned over 40 years, not that he coached all 40. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:46, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- there are a few gaps i think. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 02:24, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- 1949-1990 is 42 seasons, right?
I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 08:47, 22 October 2023 (UTC)
Everything is done except the following: "He coached them for one year and retired in 1991 at the age of 71, after a brief stint in the United Professional Football League (UPFL)." I dont see in the source where it says he retired in 1991? Also where did u get 1990 from for UPFL in the infobox? WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 05:55, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
- @WikiOriginal-9: Changed it to
Cullivan left the school in 1989 to become an assistant coach for Tennessee Wesleyan. After a stint with them, he had a short stay with a team in the United Professional Football League (UPFL) before retiring.
I also put "c. 1990" in the infobox as it was probably around that time - I can remove it if you want. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:55, 27 October 2023 (UTC)
All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 16:35, 27 October 2023 (UTC)