Talk:Identitet/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:43, 2 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox

• You can ad more in the alt of the cover, its just not the performers in it
• It is not "Folk-rock" → see below
• Heavy rock is a style

@MarioSoulTruthFan: [1] Hard rock?--Lorik17 (talk) 21:41, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Yes, just redirect to that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:01, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• by Universal → Universal

Lead

• Are Bledar Sejko and Eda Sejko brothers or something?

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I think they are related but aren't mentioned as such in any source etc.--Lorik17 (talk) 19:57, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Fine then. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:34, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

• heavy folk-rock → not folk (see below)
• three instrumentalists → there are four below?

Background and composition

• folk → not in any citation given (inspiration is not genre)
• Heavy rock is a genre
• Daily mirror is not a reliable source so you need to remove it along with all the information that goes with it
• is also recalled through violins → is remembered through the use of violins

Plagiarism accusation

• "Plavi safir" → year of release
• According to Sejko → which one of the two "Sejko"'s?

Promotion and music video

• Fine

Festivali i Këngës

• was chosen → were chosen

Malmö

• Adrian Lulgjuraj and Bledar Sejko was → Adrian Lulgjuraj and Bledar Sejko were
• while pyrotechnics and fog including flames and fireworks are also used throughout the performance →so the flames and the fireworks are part of the fog? It should be be "were also used..."

Track listing

• Fine

Release history

• Fine

References

• Fine

Overall

• You should mention the relase of the single.  Not done → It's not on the body of the article
• No critical reception?

@MarioSoulTruthFan: Added.--Lorik17 (talk) 20:20, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

@Iaof2017: You just need to find the source for the digital download of the CD.

@MarioSoulTruthFan: This=[2]; its maybe suitable?--Lorik17 (talk) 22:09, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

That's the CD I want the digital version with download. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:27, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: I found also this: [3] and this [4] but the latter was not archived.--Lorik17 (talk) 22:31, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

The digital version is what I'm lookink for, if you can't find it, jsut remove it and don't forget to change the dates. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 23:14, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

@MarioSoulTruthFan: done.--Lorik17 (talk) 23:17, 5 May 2020 (UTC)