Talk:Dera Sach Khand

Latest comment: 9 months ago by AirshipJungleman29 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: AirshipJungleman29 (talk · contribs) 18:13, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply


I'll take this review; it will be used for the WikiCup and the ongoing backlog drive. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 18:13, 3 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

  1. Is it well written?
    A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:  
    B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:  
  2. Is it verifiable with no original research?
    A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:  
    B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):  
    C. It contains no original research:  
    D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:  
  3. Is it broad in its coverage?
    A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:  
    B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):  
  4. Is it neutral?
    It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:  
  5. Is it stable?
    It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:  
  6. Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
    A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:  
    B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:  
    The Hari Dass image could use a little caption like "Hari Dass, Gaddi Nashin 1972–1982".
  7. Overall:
    Pass or Fail:  

General comments

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Spotchecks

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I will be conducting a random spotcheck of 10 citations. Numbers refer to this version:

  • 1e) good
  • 1i) good
  • 1j) good
  • 2h) close paraphrasing, needs to be rephrased.
    • Article: "On 13 December 1970, Dera Ballan hosted a large Dalit conference organized by Mangu Ram Jaspal, namesake of Mangoo Ram, to bring new life to the Ad Dharm movement. During this conference, Mangoo Ram and other leaders of the movement commended the leaders of Dera Ballan for their contributions to the Dalit community."
    • Source: "Dera Ballan also hosted a mammoth Dalit conference (December 13, 1970) organized by Mangu Ram Jaspal, namesake of the famous Mangoo Ram, to revive the Ad Dharm movement. It was during this conference that the legendry Mangoo Ram and many other prominent leaders of the Ad Dharm movement commended the contributions of the saints of Dera Ballan to the emancipation and empowerment of Dalits."
  • 2k)
    • If "The Dera encourages scholars who either carry out research on Ravidas or bring out publications on related subjects." is an attempt to paraphrase "The Dera also publishes and sponsors books on Dalit literature.", it is excessively wordy.
  • 2o) good
  • 4c) good
  • 5a) good
  • 11b) good

Generally fine, a couple of issues. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 13:45, 17 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

Thanks, and   Done. Perception312 (talk) 15:05, 18 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
I have done a thorough copyedit of the article to ensure compliance to GA criterion 1); the article is now GA quality. Congratulations! ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:46, 19 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
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