Talk:3D Face Morphable Model
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some micro-level changes
editHi@HeyGio! Thank you for your excellent work! I made some very littel-level changes in introduction: 1. "this enables" to "which enables," 2. "acquired by a 3D scanning procedure," to "acquired through a 3D scanning procedure," 3. "i.e.," to "such as" the corrected version may improving the clarity of expression. If you have any other thing please free to connect to me. Best regards, AzzurroLan AzzurroLan (talk) 12:47, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the corrections! They were spot on! HeyGio (talk) 14:27, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Review
editHi, nice to meet you!
Great work, it was even clear to an architect as myself!
In terms of structure of the article, I would suggest to just put the "History" paragraph before the one of modeling. It's a minor change actually, but it might help defining the context where the topic developed. Camilla.vi (talk) 13:31, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- I'm glad it was easy to understand! And thanks for the suggestion; I will consider moving the sections! HeyGio (talk) 14:29, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Article review
editMade small changes, such as adding capitalization and WikiLeaks. Changed the image size (which was set to the explicit pixel size) and position. I would consider moving the History section before the Modeling section to make the most logical sense. Wikisosh (talk) 13:33, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for fixing the images! I will consider moving the sections! HeyGio (talk) 14:29, 12 July 2024 (UTC)
Feedback from New Page Review process
editI left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: Very high quality work!
Observations and suggestions for improvements
editThe following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following an expert review of the article within the Science, Technology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in July 2024.
Consider moving the definition of the vector S representing the shape of a face in the "shape modeling" section rather than in the "history" section
Merger close
edit | This article was nominated for merging with Three-dimensional face recognition on August 29, 2024. The result of [discussion] was No discussion or consensus. |