User contributions for Sylviaa

29 December 2024

• 07:5107:51, 29 December 2024 diff hist −16 m The Perfect Couple (TV series) Fixed inconsistencies in whether first or last names are used for characters. Removed a redundant part of a sentence. current
• 06:3406:34, 29 December 2024 diff hist −8 m So B. It Removed a redundant link to the film adaptation, leaving the more standard link within the text. current
• 06:3006:30, 29 December 2024 diff hist 4 m So B. It (film) Fixed a tiny grammatical problem in the Introduction section current

26 December 2024

• 01:5701:57, 26 December 2024 diff hist 0 m Santa Cruz Looff Carousel and Roller Coaster In the introduction, included a link to the "Looff carousel" article. This article did not have such a link. Seems like it should! current

24 December 2024

• 21:0621:06, 24 December 2024 diff hist −14 m The Forest Hills Fixed punctuation problems in the Reception section.

22 December 2024

• 04:2004:20, 22 December 2024 diff hist 12 m Home Fires (British TV series) In the Cast and Characters section, under Claire Rushbrook, fixed a sentence structure that was ambiguous and confusing. current

11 December 2024

• 05:2905:29, 11 December 2024 diff hist 32 m Thrones, Dominations In the Background section, found and tagged a dead link. Hope I did that right. Was not able to resolve the dead link. current

7 December 2024

• 02:2902:29, 7 December 2024 diff hist 36 m Rebekah Harkness In the Marriages section there was a sentence stuck onto the wrong paragraph. I moved it and while I was there, cleaned up the grammar and punctuation in that section.

26 October 2024

• 10:2510:25, 26 October 2024 diff hist −4 m Passenger (TV series) In the Cast section, removed the link for Lisa Allen, which pointed to the article for the wrong Lisa Allen. There is no article for this Lisa.

2 October 2024

• 09:2309:23, 2 October 2024 diff hist −25 m The Night Manager (British TV series) In the Cast section, the language of two of the entries (Langbournes) was confusing. I cleaned them up.

30 August 2024

• 04:0204:02, 30 August 2024 diff hist −8 Joseph Brummer The 7th para of the Biography section was hard to understand, the way it was written. I restructured it. Hope I didn't change the meaning. Hard to tell.

9 August 2024

• 22:5822:58, 9 August 2024 diff hist 2 m The 13th Letter fixed tiny error (confusing capital, omitted "a")

28 July 2024

• 23:4123:41, 28 July 2024 diff hist −55 m Falls City, Oregon Removed a duplicate sentence--one that occurred twice in a row. current

3 June 2024

• 21:1621:16, 3 June 2024 diff hist −2 m The Paradise (TV series) A slight change in the wording of the introduction, to clear up an ambiguity (what relocates the story, novel or series?).

9 March 2024

• 03:5903:59, 9 March 2024 diff hist −45 Disappearance of Walter Collins In the See Also section, I removed the link to the Irene Silverman|Sante Kimes article. I could not find any connection between these two articles.

1 March 2024

• 10:0010:00, 1 March 2024 diff hist 0 m The Ultimate Gift Corrected misspelling of Caitlin

18 December 2023

• 21:4121:41, 18 December 2023 diff hist 27 m Carey Mulligan In the Early Life and Education section, changed some of the wording for clarity.

8 November 2023

• 20:2920:29, 8 November 2023 diff hist −1,048 Marty (The Philco Television Playhouse) In the introduction, removed information about awards won by a later (1955) adaptation, and in the Development section, removed details of casting for that later adaptation. That material belongs in the article about that later adaptation.
• 19:4919:49, 8 November 2023 diff hist 0 m Wife vs. Secretary In the Plot section, changed one word ("she" to "her"), just a grammatical error. Well, it was bugging me!

3 November 2023

• 10:1910:19, 3 November 2023 diff hist 65 m Peter Farquhar In the Murder section, rewrote a sentence to clarify what was meant by "engaged" (in quotes). Use of quotes suggested that the engagement was false in some way.

26 October 2023

• 23:2023:20, 26 October 2023 diff hist −266 Roxie Hart (film) Rewrote the Plot Summary section, because it was confusing and not really encyclopedic tone, and fixed a couple of confusing sentences in the intro. No changes in actual content.

22 July 2023

• 22:3022:30, 22 July 2023 diff hist −45 m The Crime Doctor (1934 film) In Plot section, characters were referred to sometimes by their first name and sometimes by last name. Same character, I mean. This makes it unnecessarily confusing. I standardized to first name (because two characters had same last name).

20 July 2023

• 02:3702:37, 20 July 2023 diff hist 35 m The Sin of Madelon Claudet First reference link was broken. Fixed, I think/hope.

21 May 2023

• 21:5821:58, 21 May 2023 diff hist 34 The Mother (2023 film) Charactersames alternated between first and last names

12 April 2023

• 06:5006:50, 12 April 2023 diff hist 24 m Falling in Love (1984 film) Added a few words to clarify the first line of the plot summary.

15 February 2023

• 23:1423:14, 15 February 2023 diff hist 4 m Fantastic Voyage All male characters were referred to in this article by their last names (after first mention), and the one female character by her first name. Common misogynist error. I fixed it.

8 February 2023

• 06:1406:14, 8 February 2023 diff hist 154 Talk:Mama Cax →Somebody's trolling: Reply Tag: Reply
• 06:1206:12, 8 February 2023 diff hist 374 Talk:Mama Cax →Somebody's trolling: new section Tag: New topic

23 December 2022

• 23:3823:38, 23 December 2022 diff hist −7 m User:Sylviaa Removed html-2 because that was many years ago and I haven't kept up on changes in how html is used. current

27 August 2022

• 08:1308:13, 27 August 2022 diff hist −24 m 28 Days (film) The disambiguation in the intro had a serious ambiguity, which I removed.

15 April 2022

• 07:0407:04, 15 April 2022 diff hist −61 m The Call (2013 film) Removed " 'Wonder whether any likened it to an Alfred Hitchcock movie." which had no source cited and seems to have been strictly an editorial comment

24 March 2022

• 07:1107:11, 24 March 2022 diff hist −56 m Hamilton City, California The next-to-last sentence under History sounded like advertising copy. I rewrote the sentence somewhat to be encyclopedic in style.

5 December 2021

• 02:1402:14, 5 December 2021 diff hist −42 m The Curious Incident of the Dog in the Night-Time Removed an opinion about Christopher as a character because it wasn't attributed to anybody with a citation.

22 November 2021

• 01:3601:36, 22 November 2021 diff hist 6 m Lorenzo's Oil We don't usually identify the author of a poem by first name only. Added last name.

30 July 2021

• 23:0323:03, 30 July 2021 diff hist 640 Talk:(How Much Is) That Doggie in the Window? No edit summary
• 22:5522:55, 30 July 2021 diff hist −1,467 (How Much Is) That Doggie in the Window? In the Legacy section, removed the paragraph that started "A frequent misnomer..." I think the person must have meant "misunderstanding" and doesn't understand what "misnomer" means. In any case, the statement made in the paragraph has no connection whatsoever with the sources cited (and is also obviously false).

27 June 2021

• 21:5221:52, 27 June 2021 diff hist −65 m Beyond the Valley of the Dolls In the Russ Meyer section, removed a redundant sentence that also had no source cited.

15 June 2021

• 22:5222:52, 15 June 2021 diff hist −52 m The Post (film) In the Intro and Plot sections, did some small changes for clarity, and removed a few words that provided unnecessary sexism about Graham.
• 05:4505:45, 15 June 2021 diff hist 14 m Kindergarten Cop Small rewrites in the Plot section for clarity.

11 June 2021

• 03:4803:48, 11 June 2021 diff hist 25 m Father of the Bride (1950 film) In the Cast Notes section, the link was to the book, rather than to the movie being referred to. I'm hoping I fixed it. Not sure I did it right.

7 June 2021

• 06:0006:00, 7 June 2021 diff hist −197 m 101 Dalmatians (franchise) In the Future section, removed some redundant text.

13 May 2021

• 01:4701:47, 13 May 2021 diff hist −116 m Ray Bolger In the Television section, removed "going back to his Irish roots" from the mention of his Scotch Buy commercial. (WTF?)

17 April 2021

• 06:1506:15, 17 April 2021 diff hist 50 m Dead Again Standardized the names in the Plot section so the reader has fewer character names to keep track of.

6 April 2021

• 02:3302:33, 6 April 2021 diff hist −45 m State of the Union (film) In the Plot section, standardized characters' names so last names are used (when possible) instead of alternating between last and first names (for women).

30 March 2021

• 01:0201:02, 30 March 2021 diff hist −176 m Harriet the Spy Did some rewriting of the Plot Summary section, for clarity, organization, and style.

25 March 2021

• 20:1220:12, 25 March 2021 diff hist −8 m The Dirty Dozen In the Plot section, changed two words for clarity.

20 March 2021

• 21:1121:11, 20 March 2021 diff hist 7 m Christmas Holiday Changed one word in the Novel section to resolve an ambiguity.

8 March 2021

• 07:3207:32, 8 March 2021 diff hist 2 V. K. Ratliff Trying again--the redirect should be to the first of Faulker's Snopes trilogy, not the middle one. (I accidentally did a bad link the first time and Liz changed it.) current Tag: Redirect target changed
• 07:0807:08, 8 March 2021 diff hist −46 m Ratliff Removed incorrect links (oops)

8 February 2021

• 03:1403:14, 8 February 2021 diff hist −227 Blood Work (film) Rewrote the Plot section for clarity and grammar, because it was hard to understand. It still is kind of confusing but I haven't seen the movie so...