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14:3714:37, 26 September 2024 diff hist −49 m Duwamish River I took the parenthetical phrase out because only broad details are needed in the general introduction. That specific detail about the Lushootseed language comes up in the very first section (Name) and uses the same reference, so it doesn't have to be included twice. Tags: Reverted Visual edit
14:3314:33, 26 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Duwamish River →History: I changed "Americans" to "explorers" as some would consider the native peoples the real Americans. Tag: Visual edit
14:3014:30, 26 September 2024 diff hist −31 m Duwamish River →Name: I edited the "Name" section to improve clarity, especially by noting that Lushootseed is a language. Tag: Visual edit

17:4017:40, 3 July 2023 diff hist 132 Talk:Uhuru (satellite) →Mission names: Reply Tag: Reply
17:1517:15, 3 July 2023 diff hist 94 Talk:Uhuru (satellite) →Untitled: Reply Tag: Reply
17:1117:11, 3 July 2023 diff hist 1 m Uhuru (satellite) →Naming: minor edit to clarify Tag: Visual edit

19:1319:13, 29 November 2022 diff hist −23 m Effects of climate change on oceans →top: Edited to avoid beginning the article with the "deadwood" word "There." Tag: Visual edit
19:1019:10, 29 November 2022 diff hist −38 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: deleted duplication of point about 1.6 inch hail. Tag: Visual edit
19:0819:08, 29 November 2022 diff hist −35 Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: general editing to clarify points the author wants to make. Tag: Visual edit
19:0519:05, 29 November 2022 diff hist −87 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top Tag: Visual edit
18:5918:59, 29 November 2022 diff hist −81 Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: deleted the phrase "in living memory" and edited so that the point about wheat, rice and maize prices followed directly after the assertion that prices were higher. Added a "citation needed" because that point was unsourced. Tag: Visual edit
18:5418:54, 29 November 2022 diff hist −379 Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: The last paragraph was unsourced and offered an opinion ("something to worry about"). I favor deleting the paragraph as I think the same factual points have already been made. Tag: Visual edit
18:5118:51, 29 November 2022 diff hist 8 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: Shortened the opening sentence to get to the point sooner. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
18:4818:48, 29 November 2022 diff hist −16 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: Clarifying the meaning of the sentence about sustainable food systems. Tag: Visual edit
18:4218:42, 29 November 2022 diff hist 33 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: This paragraph had long sentences that were hard to follow. I have shortened sentences without omitting any content. Tag: Visual edit
18:2918:29, 29 November 2022 diff hist 31 m Effects of climate change on agriculture →top: split a couple of sentence into two sentences to improve readability. Tag: Visual edit

19:3319:33, 30 May 2022 diff hist 17 Emma Lou Thayne completed unfinished sentence with "Mormon poets," Tag: Visual edit

13:3713:37, 15 May 2022 diff hist 74 Chase N. Peterson →top: reversed the sequencing, to reflect chronology of events Tag: Visual edit

22:5522:55, 1 April 2022 diff hist 89 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion about improving the article
22:3922:39, 1 April 2022 diff hist 386 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion about improving the article
22:1122:11, 1 April 2022 diff hist −1 Sustainability →Government action: took out the parentheses, as the sentence is just as important as the one that it follows, Tag: Visual edit
22:0622:06, 1 April 2022 diff hist −3 m Sustainability →Decoupling economic growth from environmental deterioration: very minor. deleted a period in the middle of a sentence and change environmental to environment,. Tag: Visual edit

23:3023:30, 31 March 2022 diff hist 3 m Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion
23:2723:27, 31 March 2022 diff hist 1 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion
23:2523:25, 31 March 2022 diff hist 327 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Sustainability
23:2123:21, 31 March 2022 diff hist 923 Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Sustainability/1 →Discussion
23:0823:08, 31 March 2022 diff hist 1,130 Sustainability →Economic dimension: inserted info about research disproving theory that government participation/intervention is needed. Changed "intervention" to "participation" as per Talk page. Tag: Visual edit
16:3816:38, 31 March 2022 diff hist 1 m Sustainability →top Tag: Visual edit
16:3716:37, 31 March 2022 diff hist −10 m Sustainability →top Tag: Visual edit
16:2516:25, 31 March 2022 diff hist −1 m Microplastics →Humans Tag: Visual edit

21:4421:44, 30 March 2022 diff hist −2 Sustainability →Environmental economics: readability edits in the first paragraph Tag: Visual edit
21:4021:40, 30 March 2022 diff hist 309 Sustainability →Economic dimension: inserted an example of an "Externality" to make it more clear to the average reader what an "externality" is. Tag: Visual edit
21:2721:27, 30 March 2022 diff hist 33 Sustainability →Economic dimension: attempt to improve clarity of the explanation of what decoupling is Tag: Visual edit
21:2021:20, 30 March 2022 diff hist −21 Sustainability →Economic dimension: readability edits Tag: Visual edit
21:1221:12, 30 March 2022 diff hist −2 Sustainability →Measuring human impacts on the environment: making sentences a bit shorter and easier to read. Tag: Visual edit
20:2120:21, 30 March 2022 diff hist 122 Talk:Microplastics →WikiProject Sanitation & Readability
20:1920:19, 30 March 2022 diff hist −19 Microplastics →top: The study reported mentions human blood, but not human tissue, so I deleted "human tissue" Tag: Visual edit
20:1220:12, 30 March 2022 diff hist 6 Microplastics →top: Corrected a fact: plastics found in the blood of 17 of the 22 volunteers Tag: Visual edit
20:1020:10, 30 March 2022 diff hist 371 Microplastics →top: Added 3 sentences about the 2022 study that detected polymers in human blood, which was referenced in the lead. Tag: Visual edit
16:3616:36, 30 March 2022 diff hist 435 Microplastics →top: adding exact citation. (should we remove the newspaper citation?) Tag: Visual edit

23:1123:11, 21 March 2022 diff hist −5 Sustainability →top: readability issues Tag: Visual edit
23:0823:08, 21 March 2022 diff hist −79 Sustainability →top: I deleted "also" from the phrase "Furthermore, the report also" --unnecessary. Looking for small ways to make sentences shorter by simplifying language. Tags: nowiki added Visual edit
23:0323:03, 21 March 2022 diff hist 8 Sustainability →top: clarifications and some rephrasing. Split one long sentence into two. Tag: Visual edit
22:5722:57, 21 March 2022 diff hist −16 Sustainability →top: calling the "three dimensions" a concept is not an accurate use of the term "concept" (in my book). Tag: Visual edit
22:5422:54, 21 March 2022 diff hist 0 m Sustainability →top: capitalized "The" Tag: Visual edit
22:5222:52, 21 March 2022 diff hist 12 Sustainability →top: attempt to make the section headline more clear. Tag: Visual edit
22:5022:50, 21 March 2022 diff hist 25 Sustainability →top: clarifications Tag: Visual edit
22:4722:47, 21 March 2022 diff hist −4 Sustainability →top: clarifications and reducing some wordy phrases Tag: Visual edit

13:2513:25, 8 February 2022 diff hist −1 m Sustainability →top Tag: Visual edit

19:2519:25, 5 February 2022 diff hist 716 Talk:Sustainability →A proposed new structure

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