User contributions for Mark83

25 November 2024

• 17:0717:07, 25 November 2024 diff hist −22 Raytheon Sentinel →Development: unnecessary words Tag: Visual edit

22 November 2024

• 09:2809:28, 22 November 2024 diff hist −3,069 History of Belfast Undid revision 1258859285 by Nabulowa (talk) Sorry, but this is undue focus on one particular company/individual. This is an article on the History of Belfast and there are main articles where this kind of detail better belongs. Tag: Undo
• 09:2509:25, 22 November 2024 diff hist −1,082 Economy of Northern Ireland →Coal: This article about the economy of NI. The ins and outs of one company's history can and should be covered at its article. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:0409:04, 22 November 2024 diff hist −114 BAE Systems Undid last edit per MOS:LINKONCE Tag: Undo

21 November 2024

• 09:1509:15, 21 November 2024 diff hist −9 BAE Systems Revert. There are references there! Don't let your personal preference(s) get in the way of facts. That language passed a Featured Article review by the way. Tag: Undo

20 November 2024

• 20:0620:06, 20 November 2024 diff hist 1 BAE Systems Undid revision 1258605460 by 66.19.47.250 (talk) - disagree with that. It is incorrectly restricting it to one year which is incorrect. Tag: Undo

18 November 2024

• 09:5609:56, 18 November 2024 diff hist −76 SPEAR 3 →Background: the expected test firing date was good content at the time, but now not required since it's happened and covered well in the next sentence. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:5509:55, 18 November 2024 diff hist −81 SPEAR 3 →Background: totally extraneous information. Tag: Visual edit
• 09:5409:54, 18 November 2024 diff hist 11 SPEAR 3 →Background: minor corrections and tweaks. The addition of "Navy Lookout" in the article title is a bit strange: not actually in the title and repetition anyway of the rest of the cite. Tag: Visual edit

13 November 2024

• 14:5814:58, 13 November 2024 diff hist −76 Global Combat Air Programme Irrelevant
• 14:4714:47, 13 November 2024 diff hist −244 Global Combat Air Programme Tidy last.

12 November 2024

• 19:4019:40, 12 November 2024 diff hist 4 Belfast City Quays (not even finished) takes up less than 10% of this image, therefore that's a really poor caption. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
• 19:3719:37, 12 November 2024 diff hist −220 Talk:SES (company) Undid revision 1257011225 by 2402:E000:4B0:CA21:6E:6FF:FEFE:32E3 (talk) current Tag: Undo

8 November 2024

• 14:2914:29, 8 November 2024 diff hist −20 Future Cruise/Anti-Ship Weapon →Early design characteristics: "it is understood that" is not great language. We need to be definitive about facts where possible, and the source is clear. Also "MBDA stresses" is plural. Companies are singular. Tag: Visual edit

1 November 2024

• 15:4315:43, 1 November 2024 diff hist −25 Rushmere Shopping Centre Undid revision 1253746255 by 2A06:5906:3A14:8E00:50D6:7DE0:A044:5ADD (talk) Reference? Tag: Undo

31 October 2024

• 09:4709:47, 31 October 2024 diff hist −1,133 BAE Systems →2020s: I don't see this as significant enough to be covered here, definitely not minutiae such as the exact time. Covered at the subsidiary article. Tags: Manual revert Visual edit
• 09:4509:45, 31 October 2024 diff hist −605 BAE Systems Submarines →History: WP:CITEKILL current Tag: Visual edit

30 October 2024

• 14:3014:30, 30 October 2024 diff hist −124 BAE Systems Submarines Tidy up a bit of a messy edit. Tag: Visual edit

29 October 2024

• 15:1815:18, 29 October 2024 diff hist −69 Belfast Grand Central station The url is making the whole infobox too wide. Not sure it's adding much anyone?

25 October 2024

• 17:1317:13, 25 October 2024 diff hist −17 Tesco companies are singular Tag: Visual edit
• 17:0517:05, 25 October 2024 diff hist −13 Sainsbury's →Takeover bids (2007): companies are singular Tag: Visual edit

19 October 2024

• 13:5613:56, 19 October 2024 diff hist −48 Belfast Grand Central station →Controversies: repetition Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5613:56, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1,005 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Tidyup including removal of repetition Tag: Visual edit
• 13:5013:50, 19 October 2024 diff hist −70 Belfast Grand Central station →Context: too tangential Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4813:48, 19 October 2024 diff hist 35 Belfast Grand Central station →Station location and facilities: Linked Northern Ireland Transport Holding Company and explained the trading name of Translink - not clear to most readers without such explanation. Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4513:45, 19 October 2024 diff hist −116 Belfast Grand Central station →Context: Just noticed this is covered in first line of next paragraph Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4513:45, 19 October 2024 diff hist −335 Belfast Grand Central station →Context: updated and made clearer Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4213:42, 19 October 2024 diff hist −236 Belfast Grand Central station →Context: Covered in first paragraph Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4113:41, 19 October 2024 diff hist −902 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Covered in controversy section Tag: Visual edit
• 13:4013:40, 19 October 2024 diff hist −154 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Just because someone is quoted as saying something doesn't automatically make it worthy of inclusion in an encyclopedia. Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3913:39, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1,223 Belfast Grand Central station →Context: These all provide context for the Great Vic St Station and Europa Buscentre, not for this building. Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3813:38, 19 October 2024 diff hist −362 Belfast Grand Central station Link first instance only Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3313:33, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1,757 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: First part of this out of date. Second part pure promotional language (direct marketing quote from the company). Tag: Visual edit
• 13:3213:32, 19 October 2024 diff hist 14 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: more appropriate link Tag: Visual edit
• 12:1612:16, 19 October 2024 diff hist 2 m Sainsbury's →Brand relaunch (1999–2003): correction Tag: Visual edit
• 12:1512:15, 19 October 2024 diff hist −7,171 Sainsbury's →Controversy: Removed non-noteable and isolated incidents. Tag: Visual edit

18 October 2024

• 17:0417:04, 18 October 2024 diff hist −1 Translink (Northern Ireland) →Criticisms: £15,000 just the cost of design. Not full implementation which is likely 6 or 7 figures current Tag: Visual edit

17 October 2024

• 20:1420:14, 17 October 2024 diff hist −26 Belfast Grand Central station →Controversies: Redundant Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1320:13, 17 October 2024 diff hist −123 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Remove promo language Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1220:12, 17 October 2024 diff hist −67 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Redundant Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1120:11, 17 October 2024 diff hist −2,178 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Remove out of date info along with promotional-like content which (again) reads like someone from Translink is editing this article. Tag: Visual edit
• 20:1020:10, 17 October 2024 diff hist −59 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: did Translink write this? Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0920:09, 17 October 2024 diff hist −51 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: Train stops at all stations !?? Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0820:08, 17 October 2024 diff hist −945 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: What's the relevance? Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0720:07, 17 October 2024 diff hist 101 Belfast Grand Central station →Progress: tag Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0420:04, 17 October 2024 diff hist −106 Belfast Grand Central station →Bus station: At some point an encyclopaedia can transmit too much information (minutiae) Tag: Visual edit
• 20:0320:03, 17 October 2024 diff hist 8 Belfast Grand Central station →Station location and facilities: The inability of some people to correctly interpret references is a concern. Not THE flagship project of the NI government, but ONE OF! Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5919:59, 17 October 2024 diff hist −44 Slim Chickens Reference? Tag: Undo
• 19:5719:57, 17 October 2024 diff hist −117 Sprucefield →Sprucefield Park: Illogical repetition Tag: Visual edit
• 19:5619:56, 17 October 2024 diff hist −24 Sprucefield →Sprucefield Park: Fixing basic English language issues. Tag: Visual edit