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A user with 13,642 edits. Account created on 19 October 2003.
21 December 2024
- 14:3214:32, 21 December 2024 diff hist 24 Flames of Freedom notelist current
- 14:3114:31, 21 December 2024 diff hist −3 Flames of Freedom →Strategy layer: Writing "It's James Bond but all you do as an agent is part of a math puzzle" would just lead to reasonable follow-up questions, such as "What kind of math puzzle?" and "What are you talking about?" I stand by the footnotes too. A game with 10s hrs playtime that skips to the endgame w/o "are you sure?" when you press A is bananas, and the approach of limiting the player's movement is the exact opposite of what's been done for the last ~25 years. Peculiarities worth noting.
- 14:2014:20, 21 December 2024 diff hist 2,578 Flames of Freedom →Gameplay: Very finicky, but good for the article and not OR or GAMEGUIDE. When a game is conventional, we sum up much of what needs to be said about it with "This game is a platformer." Or "This game is a RTS." (This is against the video game Manual of Style, which requires writing for no prior knowledge of gaming. We do it anyway.) This works the other way round, too: when a game's bonkers we need more space to adequately describe what's up, and can rely less on conventions' shorthand.
14 December 2024
- 00:1400:14, 14 December 2024 diff hist 317 Michael Conahan →Federal investigation: Politico, could be useful since this source talks about this one pardon specifically and in more depth.
13 December 2024
12 December 2024
- 17:4117:41, 12 December 2024 diff hist −59 m Talk:2024 South Korean martial law crisis ight imma head out
- 17:4017:40, 12 December 2024 diff hist −5 m Talk:2024 South Korean martial law crisis double sigh
- 17:3817:38, 12 December 2024 diff hist 1 m Talk:2024 South Korean martial law crisis →Requested move 3 December 2024: sigh
- 17:3717:37, 12 December 2024 diff hist 1,778 Talk:2024 South Korean martial law crisis →Requested move 3 December 2024
4 December 2024
- 09:5909:59, 4 December 2024 diff hist −7 Peace on Earth (film) phrasing
- 09:3709:37, 4 December 2024 diff hist 1,014 Talk:2024 South Korean martial law crisis →Article name change?: Oppose, link to Talk:2024 South Korean martial law#Requested move 3 December 2024
2 December 2024
- 10:0910:09, 2 December 2024 diff hist 4 m Giora Eiland wikilinked Nakba.
- 10:0510:05, 2 December 2024 diff hist 69 World Central Kitchen Reordered Gaza casualties in lead
28 November 2024
- 21:5821:58, 28 November 2024 diff hist 1,468 Randy Fine →U.S. House of Representatives candidacy: According to WP:RSP, The Daily Dot is acceptable for the non-contentious.
22 November 2024
- 15:5115:51, 22 November 2024 diff hist −12 The Day After →Plot
9 November 2024
- 02:5302:53, 9 November 2024 diff hist 4 m Fuzzy bit No edit summary current
6 November 2024
- 00:5800:58, 6 November 2024 diff hist −75 The Day After →Plot
29 October 2024
- 20:1020:10, 29 October 2024 diff hist −11 Peace on Earth (film) Naw.
- 20:0920:09, 29 October 2024 diff hist 384 Peace on Earth (film) →Plot: Partial rewrite.
23 October 2024
- 23:4123:41, 23 October 2024 diff hist −8 m The Day After make that up by 4.
- 23:3923:39, 23 October 2024 diff hist 120 The Day After →Plot: Since word count is an issue, removed the conversions to kilometer and the mention in this section of Guttenberg as Klein. Trimmed the part about the nuclear attack (e.g. needn't mention what blinds Danny) but readded in shortened form McCoy's part as I'm told it's important to his characterization (not to mention the character's only characterization we give in this summary). The word count about the nuclear attack increases by 5, but this part of the summary is left in better shape.
19 October 2024
- 21:5721:57, 19 October 2024 diff hist 1 m Cellana strigilis →Description current
- 20:0620:06, 19 October 2024 diff hist 11 Timeline of transport in Oslo Word order. Also wikilinked horsecar. current
- 20:0420:04, 19 October 2024 diff hist 203 Talk:Original War →issues that needs to corrected: Done. current
- 20:0220:02, 19 October 2024 diff hist −1 Original War Changed infobox: the game is an RTS, although a highly unusual one, missing defining features of the genre. (Compare Bionic Commando, a series of platformers without a jump button.) Soviet Union -> Russia, per talk page.
- 19:5619:56, 19 October 2024 diff hist −16 Original War →Plot
- 19:5519:55, 19 October 2024 diff hist −115 Original War →Gameplay: I was wrong.
- 19:1719:17, 19 October 2024 diff hist −239 The Day After →Plot: Re: this and previous edit, rm mention of Pact forces in East Germany consisting of East German and Soviet Armies. Force composition is interesting, but doesn't really help understand the hows and whys of this movie or the real life situation it was made to talk about. Both sides attack targets in the Persian Gulf. Tactical nukes are stated policy, not a new threat. This is 1 day.
- 18:3918:39, 19 October 2024 diff hist 407 The Day After →Plot: restored mention and wikilink of the Helmstedt-Marienborn crossing. This is not important to the plot. However, the film's grounding in the real world is both crucial to it and something it's very famous for, so elementary information viewers were assumed to know but our readers may not is more relevant & possibly of interest to our readers. This includes elementary information about the nature of transportation arrangements to West Berlin, the film's flashpoint for nuclear war.
18 October 2024
- 04:1304:13, 18 October 2024 diff hist −324 The Day After →Plot: I ain't happy with trying to decide by word count what gets said. Things take the time they take. However, if length's a factor, the first order of business is to say things more tersely, no downside in that. Also removed the mention about dispatch of nuclear weapons, as AIUI that only comes up as a mention of the Brits pensive about NATO positioning Pershing-2s and cruise missiles in Europe, which is background to the strategic situation but not part of the whole thing cooking off.
15 October 2024
- 16:3616:36, 15 October 2024 diff hist 0 m Cultural Marxism conspiracy theory capitalization
9 October 2024
- 22:4922:49, 9 October 2024 diff hist −285 Original War →Plot: tightening things up
18 September 2024
- 21:4621:46, 18 September 2024 diff hist 15 m Killing of Sonya Massey →Aftermath: (sigh)
- 21:4321:43, 18 September 2024 diff hist −37 Killing of Sonya Massey →Aftermath: I think our readers get that it was controversial.
12 September 2024
- 21:0921:09, 12 September 2024 diff hist −1 m Incubation: Time Is Running Out →Plot: grammar
8 September 2024
- 22:5722:57, 8 September 2024 diff hist 0 m Texas Ranger Division the January 28, 1918 massacre -> the January 28, 1918 massacre to make it clearer to readers without mouseovering, tapping or the like that the link leads to the article for this specific one and not massacres in general
1 September 2024
- 00:0600:06, 1 September 2024 diff hist 179 m Ayaiga archiving abc link current
31 August 2024
- 23:1623:16, 31 August 2024 diff hist 4 m Harry McNish →Polar Medal: wikilinked medal
- 23:0923:09, 31 August 2024 diff hist 76 Mrs Chippy →Cultural references: link to painting at Wikimedia Commons current
29 August 2024
- 12:3712:37, 29 August 2024 diff hist 0 m Vilhelm Junnila →Political views: decapitalization
- 12:3612:36, 29 August 2024 diff hist −250 Mari Rantanen →Controversies: you mean "in the same paragraph." This is true. I don't think it changes things one way or the other about her statement about being blue-eyed.
11 August 2024
- 01:0601:06, 11 August 2024 diff hist −1 m In the Presence of Mine Enemies No edit summary
2 August 2024
- 21:0221:02, 2 August 2024 diff hist −720 Imane Khelif "Biographies of living persons ("BLPs") must be written conservatively and with regard for the subject's privacy. Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, not a tabloid: it is not Wikipedia's job to be sensationalist, or to be the primary vehicle for the spread of titillating claims about people's lives." - WP:BLP. In theory this could be a neutral statement about a curious quirk of biology; in practice it'll make people think or wonder about Khelif, and per the note on records, has no basis to do so.
1 August 2024
- 16:2316:23, 1 August 2024 diff hist 953 Sinfest Addressing current state of the subject via primary sources, by restricting ourselves strictly to factual statements about the sources used rather than more general statements. Tag: Reverted
12 July 2024
4 July 2024
- 23:3823:38, 4 July 2024 diff hist 4 m My Lai massacre →Investigation and cover-up: redirect
- 23:3623:36, 4 July 2024 diff hist 66 Five O'Clock Follies see also section with a link to United States news media and the Vietnam War. Could work it into the lead instead.
22 June 2024
11 June 2024
- 00:4100:41, 11 June 2024 diff hist 77 Paul Gosar attacking AOC -> killing AOC. Now please strap in, this is where the nitpicking comes. It's an important distinction that Gosar's video showed him killing, not just attacking a colleague. But if we write "killing a character with AOC's face", readers'll think of something far worse than the video (which was already bad enough to get him censured & kicked off committees). And if we writer "killing a monster with AOC's face" they'll think of a giant boar or something. So giant it is.
1 May 2024
- 20:4020:40, 1 May 2024 diff hist −28 AI-assisted targeting in the Gaza Strip Trimming lead
