User contributions for DKqwerty

10 October 2023

• 08:4708:47, 10 October 2023 diff hist −47 Kiri-sute gomen →lede: minor copyedit: "old" is a redundancy; misc. copyediting for clarity; rm larger redundancy

23 July 2023

• 23:3923:39, 23 July 2023 diff hist −144 User talk:JAStewart Undid unproductive edit by 94.102.82.82 (talk): anonymous bump of ancient thread current Tag: Undo

1 July 2023

• 02:4502:45, 1 July 2023 diff hist −22 m Mass media →Issues with definition: minor copyedit: this distinction is meaningless given the broad context

4 April 2023

• 00:4700:47, 4 April 2023 diff hist 1 m King Kong →Overview: more mature wording; minor copyediting
• 00:4400:44, 4 April 2023 diff hist 27 King Kong →lede: {{By whom}}: with current wording, it's a vague real-world attribution for which there are no references (nor is the subject followed-up upon later in the article except in-universe)

24 April 2022

• 05:5205:52, 24 April 2022 diff hist −25 m E Ink rm quantification: only cited source doesn't support this assessment

12 April 2021

• 22:1822:18, 12 April 2021 diff hist 41 m Joystick →lede: further refinement: non-breaking spaces to prevent disconnection from enumeration; pluralize suction cups: two are visible

10 April 2021

• 02:0202:02, 10 April 2021 diff hist 52 Joystick →lede: anchor "VG joystick" and "hat switch" in image caption; reword caption to clarify that not all VG joysticks necessarily have those features

16 March 2021

• 08:1608:16, 16 March 2021 diff hist −326 Tiger Woods PGA Tour 11 rm unneeded {{clear}} template creating massive whitespace after the lede; →Trivia: rm section per WP:HTRIV (a policy which could not be more apt in this context)

14 March 2021

• 05:5105:51, 14 March 2021 diff hist −14,080 Arc Rise Fantasia →Synopsis: rm section per WP:WAF, WP:SS, WP:COPY, etc.: this is NOT a synopsis, this is a nearly complete retelling of a someone else's intellectual property

2 December 2020

• 07:3807:38, 2 December 2020 diff hist −67 Animal Crackers Undid unproductive edit by 173.12.189.101 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 07:3807:38, 2 December 2020 diff hist −68 Nutcracker (disambiguation) Undid unproductive edit by 173.12.189.101 (talk) per WP:RED: when there's an article, then we'll add it Tag: Undo

7 October 2020

• 00:4000:40, 7 October 2020 diff hist −1 m Childrens Hospital →Recurring: further clarification

17 September 2020

• 06:1906:19, 17 September 2020 diff hist 70 Childrens Hospital →Recurring: clarify & refine info about Viscuso; other misc. for clarity/brevity/grammar

13 June 2020

• 19:0219:02, 13 June 2020 diff hist −45 Kubernetes →History: update ref link; correct project name per ref; tighten up wording about Seven of Nine for brevity; italicize Star Trek per WP:MOS: series name

5 March 2020

• 05:4505:45, 5 March 2020 diff hist −10 Zendrum →History: rm circular wikilink; de-embolden "Synthaxe Drumitar": the lede clearly specifies Zendrum is based on it, so it can't be another name for article subject

1 March 2020

• 20:4720:47, 1 March 2020 diff hist 714 Talk:YCbCr →Ref image discrepancy: new section

8 February 2020

• 05:5005:50, 8 February 2020 diff hist −8 m Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl →Cast: rm overlinking: 99% of people reading this will know what "drunk" and "gay" are
• 05:4705:47, 8 February 2020 diff hist 128 Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl update quote and expand/clarify: orig. wording made it seem like this was an actual conversation that took place
• 05:3205:32, 8 February 2020 diff hist 148 m Pirates of the Caribbean: The Curse of the Black Pearl →Cast: update ref with archive url

29 January 2020

• 20:1820:18, 29 January 2020 diff hist −23 List of Allied World War II conferences Undid good-faith edit by 2001:…:C254:85B (talk): overlinking Tag: Undo
• 18:4418:44, 29 January 2020 diff hist 103 The Central Park Concert →External links: add IMDB per my previous edit; format AOL link
• 18:3618:36, 29 January 2020 diff hist −3,306 The Central Park Concert →Personnel: hyphens/N-dashes → M-dashes; rm unneeded non-breaking spaces; simplify instrument listing and linking; rm exhaustive production listing per WP:IINFO: lacks any context or obvious need, missing dozens of credited personal, and info is available on more appropriate archival platforms, including IMDB

15 January 2020

• 09:1609:16, 15 January 2020 diff hist 77 Akira (1988 film) →Home media: "very first" → "first"; rm "currently possible" per WP:DATED; rm overlinking; clarify audio formats; misc. copyediting for brevity and clarity

19 November 2019

• 16:5416:54, 19 November 2019 diff hist −42 Son of a Preacher Man →Origins: misc. copyediting for clarity/brevity: rm excessive and redundant wording, rectify syntactical issues, clarify which Franklin in ¶2, "till" → "until"
• 10:2110:21, 19 November 2019 diff hist −93 Colonialism rm recently-added short description: even for a brief description, far too generalized and ignores associated imperialism (ie. sounds like nation building rather than conquest)
• 10:1210:12, 19 November 2019 diff hist −24 Louise Slaughter →lede: "Chairwoman" → "Chairperson": House tends to use the latter in official publications; "obtaining" → "earn": one earns their degree; minor condense/trim of material for concision/brevity
• 09:5909:59, 19 November 2019 diff hist −9 Louise Slaughter →lede: correct tense: despite her death, the district continues to exist and still encompasses Rochester and Monroe County; reword district numbering date; rm whitespace

30 April 2019

• 17:5617:56, 30 April 2019 diff hist −968 Off the Map (video) rm original research tagged for nearly a decade; correct run time (w/ hidden note); misc. copyediting

1 April 2019

• 07:1907:19, 1 April 2019 diff hist −221 Unplugged (Alice in Chains album) →Overview: rm pure opinion

31 March 2019

• 05:2805:28, 31 March 2019 diff hist −5 m Live at Piedmont Park update RS review link

29 March 2019

• 02:0402:04, 29 March 2019 diff hist 3,406 DVD move info not exclusive to recordable discs into a new "Specifications" sub-sec; expand section to include DVD-10, -13, and -14; other misc. copyediting

28 March 2019

• 00:4700:47, 28 March 2019 diff hist −486 Liquid Tension Experiment 2 →Overview: rm orig. research: citation is for overall influence, not the riff itself; rm redundancy

27 March 2019

• 20:2420:24, 27 March 2019 diff hist −51 m DVD additional (albeit minor) misc. copyediting
• 19:4519:45, 27 March 2019 diff hist −14 DVD →DVD recordable and rewritable: move disc image out of 'Dual-layer' and into 'Recordable' where it relevent; misc. copyediting
• 19:3719:37, 27 March 2019 diff hist 103 DVD rm redundant mentions of transition pause and recording speed; {{Cn}} for rec. speed and recorder costs; misc copyediting for clarity, brevity, grammar, syntax, etc. per WP:MOS, WP:WEASEL, WP:NOTGUIDE, et al.

25 March 2019

• 06:5806:58, 25 March 2019 diff hist −144 The Hunt for Red October (1990 video game) rm links per WP:COPYLINK; correct tense: game continues to feature these sequences; '5' → 'five'; misc. copyediting

19 October 2018

• 17:5217:52, 19 October 2018 diff hist 3 m Virus "those that cause AIDS" → "HIV": rm needlessly oblique wording; "or even sabotage": HIV doesn't simply evade, but cripples immune response
• 17:4517:45, 19 October 2018 diff hist −47 m Virus rm "antibiotic" reference: self-evident and irrelevant (might as well mention that allergy meds, anti-rejection meds, homeopathy, leeches, trepanation, et al "have no effect" either…)
• 05:5705:57, 19 October 2018 diff hist 8 Mark Twain →Love of science and technology: rephrase AH part for clarification: use of historical "what ifs" extends beyond science fiction (super hero lore, video games, etc.); rm "said to be": redundant and chatty

15 May 2018

• 20:1520:15, 15 May 2018 diff hist −204 Super NES Classic Edition Undid good-faith edit by TheDisneyGamer (talk): no need for a list here, the number is fine; "first-ever" and "first" are same thing; release dates are in info box Tag: Undo

8 May 2018

• 23:2523:25, 8 May 2018 diff hist 14 m Super NES Classic Edition clarify Star Fox 2 in lede: rm "new" per WP:RECENTISM and replace with "first official" (unofficial pirated ROMs have existed for public consumption for some time)

23 March 2018

• 06:3506:35, 23 March 2018 diff hist −7 m IBM Works fix error I introduced in external link; minor copyedit
• 06:3206:32, 23 March 2018 diff hist −1 m D'arcy Wretzky →lede: correct tense: even if not current bassist, she is still the original

19 March 2018

• 23:4223:42, 19 March 2018 diff hist −24 IBM Works →lede: correct tense: though well out of favor, it continues to be an office suite, still includes the mentioned applications when installed, and is still included in BonusPak; minor copyedit; update external link

18 March 2018

• 22:2622:26, 18 March 2018 diff hist 26 Tachyon move Sept. 2011 info from lede and move to history per WP:LEDE: a specific event in which the particles were NOT found is irrelevant to the general introduction of the subject; correct caption to remove "we" per WP:YOU

27 November 2017

• 04:5404:54, 27 November 2017 diff hist −79 The Nutcracker and the Mouse King →lede: rm opinion →Adaptations: separate entries for Dumas and Tchaikovsky; {{Ref improve}}
• 04:4404:44, 27 November 2017 diff hist −217 Trepak (The Nutcracker) rm pure opinion

13 November 2017

• 07:2707:27, 13 November 2017 diff hist −160 Set animal →Physical characteristics: rm tagged statement per WP:WEASEL, WP:V, WP:NOR, et al.

4 November 2017

• 01:5201:52, 4 November 2017 diff hist 240 Harpocrates →Cultural uses: add ref for uncited info; condense and delink examples list; minor addition; condense {{See also}}