User contributions for 76.126.217.195

8 December 2010

• 01:1501:15, 8 December 2010 diff hist 549 Talk:Carry On Columbus →Definitely could use sources: new section

7 December 2010

• 21:1021:10, 7 December 2010 diff hist −52 Ministry of State Security (China) Same. Too many "weasel words" stating what is not known.
• 21:0821:08, 7 December 2010 diff hist −42 Ministry of State Security (China) Removes short superfluous sentence.

4 December 2010

• 10:4510:45, 4 December 2010 diff hist −17 Gérard Depardieu removes unatested peacock phrase

2 December 2010

• 20:4720:47, 2 December 2010 diff hist 171 Steam locomotive Added sentences to lede. Removed tag request to expand lede.

27 November 2010

• 19:2819:28, 27 November 2010 diff hist −201 Pat Boone "Virtually ever" ? (sic) Meaning "virtually every"?? This is hype. If every musical performer made an appearance, that would mean millions. Words replaced with modest claim. trims overlinking

25 November 2010

• 14:4214:42, 25 November 2010 diff hist 308 User talk:Puffin adds cites
• 14:3514:35, 25 November 2010 diff hist 1,207 User talk:Puffin Incorrect revert, no reason given, incorrect statement
• 14:2414:24, 25 November 2010 diff hist −2,645 Matthew C. Perry Puffin, you reverted without giving an explanation in Edit Summary, then wrote to my talk page, claiming I had not given an Edit Summary (which I clearly did). I am a VERY experienced Wiki editor, btw
• 14:2114:21, 25 November 2010 diff hist 313 User talk:76.126.217.195 Wrong

23 November 2010

• 17:3817:38, 23 November 2010 diff hist −2,645 Matthew C. Perry Wikipedia is not a genealogical record, not a database, not a place to establish notability by association Tag: references removed
• 01:0801:08, 23 November 2010 diff hist −33 Delta IV fixes spelling typo, changes two European dates

21 November 2010

• 11:1911:19, 21 November 2010 diff hist −212 Jennifer Beals Removes insubstantial, unencyclopedic claim about being a "good" friend. No encyclopedic meaning, even if there was a citation, which there wasn't.

20 November 2010

• 16:2016:20, 20 November 2010 diff hist −98 Paul Ekman trims peacock

17 November 2010

• 23:4223:42, 17 November 2010 diff hist −140 Hawaii Five-O (1968 TV series) rmv ext spam links
• 23:3923:39, 17 November 2010 diff hist −774 Jack Lord Copy edit. Regularizes naming. WP:Linking. Removes plug for real estate developer. Removes fame-by-association off-topic actors.

8 November 2010

• 22:5722:57, 8 November 2010 diff hist −811 Activision One external link to an official company site. Wikipedia is WP:NOT a linkfarm, an online directory, or a free company promotional site

6 November 2010

• 03:3103:31, 6 November 2010 diff hist −31 Miloš Forman rmv overlinking
• 03:2803:28, 6 November 2010 diff hist −102 Larry Flynt The building from which he was shot has nothing to do with topic. Are there pictures of buildings from which anyone else was shot in Wiki?

5 November 2010

• 03:5303:53, 5 November 2010 diff hist 1 Hugh Laurie "Lead too short" is not a critical issue ... moved for the convenience of majority of Wiki readers to lower in article

4 November 2010

• 21:4721:47, 4 November 2010 diff hist 387 Talk:The Witcher Specificity would be helpful, even in valid criticism
• 21:3921:39, 4 November 2010 diff hist −75 The Witcher "widely acclaimed by fans" -- without a proper citation -- doesn't have meaning
• 11:5611:56, 4 November 2010 diff hist −2 Jacquard weaving Moves a definitional sentence to first para.
• 00:5800:58, 4 November 2010 diff hist 722 Talk:Dilbert Dilbert is a telephone technician

2 November 2010

• 07:3207:32, 2 November 2010 diff hist 10 Adobe Photoshop Elements Rmv TOC, per Discussion
• 07:3107:31, 2 November 2010 diff hist 441 Talk:Adobe Photoshop Elements Yes, TOC not needed here.

31 October 2010

• 05:2305:23, 31 October 2010 diff hist −313 Afghan rug Article was/is a mess of promotion, political motivated statements, and uncited personal observation. There's considerable scholarly, encyclopedic material to draw on (not blogs) Tag: references removed
• 05:0005:00, 31 October 2010 diff hist 40 Afghan rug Not true all rugs gain in value, only some do
• 04:5704:57, 31 October 2010 diff hist −68 Afghan rug Removes uncited, inspecific claim about business increasing in a certain area

30 October 2010

• 12:0112:01, 30 October 2010 diff hist −679 Reckitt This is company hype. Wikipedia is not a showcase for the image Benckiser wants to impose on their employees. The peacock words aren't encyclopedic here, and have questionable value, anywhere.

29 October 2010

• 20:2520:25, 29 October 2010 diff hist 3 Project 22350 frigate same
• 20:2020:20, 29 October 2010 diff hist −106 Project 22350 frigate corrects typos and English

28 October 2010

• 15:1015:10, 28 October 2010 diff hist −41 Sean Astin has absolutely nothing to do with article topic
• 14:5514:55, 28 October 2010 diff hist −62 NIST-F1 correcting the usual amateur Wiki editing

14 October 2010

• 22:2422:24, 14 October 2010 diff hist −78 Tropical Islands Resort Fixes English in Interesting Facts, removes pricing. Wiki is not a promotional platform

2 October 2010

• 13:0713:07, 2 October 2010 diff hist −465 Heidi Fleiss Removes: Multiple links to IMDB, retaining main link; broken "forbidden" link, link to amateur page w/o references
• 11:4511:45, 2 October 2010 diff hist 518 Talk:Gliese 581g NASA's non-role
• 07:5107:51, 2 October 2010 diff hist −335 Tove Jansson Removes commercial and fan links that add nothing encyclopedic that couldn't easily be added to article itself. Wikipedia is not a free advertising site. Nor is it to promote fan sites.

30 September 2010

• 10:1710:17, 30 September 2010 diff hist 436 Talk:The Beatles Let's move on. The Beatles knew how.
• 10:0510:05, 30 September 2010 diff hist 560 Talk:The Beatles Really: enough PR and politically correct. fools and friends of fools

29 September 2010

• 08:4108:41, 29 September 2010 diff hist 629 Talk:Clay Blair Opinions which are backed up according to Wiki policy

27 September 2010

• 12:1612:16, 27 September 2010 diff hist −2,363 Talk:Dungeons & Dragons Online The problem with DDO Wiki described has now been resolved, so comment is unnecessary.

25 September 2010

• 12:4412:44, 25 September 2010 diff hist −89 Tim Lincecum Overlinking WP:LINKING. Other minor copy edit.
• 12:0912:09, 25 September 2010 diff hist 416 Wikipedia:Reference desk/Archives/Miscellaneous/2010 September 20 Wiki babble goes on forever
• 12:0012:00, 25 September 2010 diff hist −756 Kaffir lime Removes material and reference which is not to the reliable reference stated, but instead to a blog. Removes peculiar, uncited suggestion that the leaves look like some insect. (What insect is that?) Tag: references removed

23 September 2010

• 18:5318:53, 23 September 2010 diff hist −7 Potlatch removes peacock word "vital" which is not supported by citation

19 September 2010

• 08:2408:24, 19 September 2010 diff hist −122 Catherine McGoohan Removes pointless comparison to her father's career
• 07:3607:36, 19 September 2010 diff hist −247 Barbara Stanwyck Removes uncited, not-necessarily-factual editorial commentary. Removes Wiki-disallowed blog ref. Tag: references removed
• 07:0807:08, 19 September 2010 diff hist −232 Richard Dean Anderson WP:LINKING

3 June 2009

• 08:4808:48, 3 June 2009 diff hist 43 Dunn (surname) →J