User contributions for 67.234.138.239

5 October 2012

• 22:5222:52, 5 October 2012 diff hist 5 Veruca Salt →1993-1998: formation and growth: Poor grammar ("The band had done" ) re-wriiten for flow/readability.
• 19:5719:57, 5 October 2012 diff hist −5 Night of the Living Dead →Plot summary: There was no way of know if the corpse was "half eaten" or if the woman herself was a zombie killed by the previous residents of the home. Opinion/conclusion.
• 19:3019:30, 5 October 2012 diff hist 254 Night of the Living Dead No edit summary
• 19:2519:25, 5 October 2012 diff hist 616 Talk:Night of the Living Dead No edit summary
• 19:1919:19, 5 October 2012 diff hist −88 User talk:69.44.6.229 →Vandalism Night of The Living Dead
• 19:1819:18, 5 October 2012 diff hist 420 User talk:69.44.6.229 No edit summary
• 18:3918:39, 5 October 2012 diff hist −12 Nina Gordon →Solo: Who are "they" and what does 'eventually' infer in this context? Re-written for clarity.
• 14:4214:42, 5 October 2012 diff hist 297 Talk:Night of the Living Dead →Addition by anonymous users about band of doubtful notability, referenced by the band's home page. No edit summary.
• 14:2314:23, 5 October 2012 diff hist −5 Night of the Living Dead The character isn't named anything other than 'Ben' in the film, or in the credits. No surname is ever given.
• 14:2114:21, 5 October 2012 diff hist −51 Night of the Living Dead Un-cited claims that the film only became a financial success "After decades of cinematic re-releases (what cinematic re-releases??!!!)" is complete nonsense. The film turned a profit almost at once and quickly earned back it's budget.

4 October 2012

• 21:5921:59, 4 October 2012 diff hist 487 User talk:108.223.33.233 →April 2012
• 21:4021:40, 4 October 2012 diff hist −129 The B-52s None of the persons mentioned is, nor ever has been, a full member of the band. These are session and touring members.
• 21:3821:38, 4 October 2012 diff hist −253 The B-52s →Band members: Deleted touring and session musicians being presented as full members. Deceptive, inaccurate.
• 21:3721:37, 4 October 2012 diff hist −90 The B-52s None of the persons mentioned is, nor ever has been, a full member of the band. These are session and touring members.
• 16:4716:47, 4 October 2012 diff hist −11 Foo Fighters →History: "some small songs?" vague/unclear in meaning.
• 16:3516:35, 4 October 2012 diff hist −6 Louise Post →Personal life: Grammar and re-written for flow/clarity.
• 16:3316:33, 4 October 2012 diff hist 18 Louise Post →Personal life: Atrocious grammar, re-written.for understandability/flow,

3 October 2012

• 19:4419:44, 3 October 2012 diff hist −9 Jamie Lynn Spears →Career: Grammar and factual accuracy, This was not a "cameo" appearance by definition, she received full billing and screen credit. Nor did she "did a cameo" atrocious grammar.
• 16:3516:35, 3 October 2012 diff hist 268 User talk:PrivateSponge No edit summary
• 16:3316:33, 3 October 2012 diff hist 0 Talk:Billy Preston →Gay?: Misspelling/formatting
• 16:3016:30, 3 October 2012 diff hist 1 Talk:Billy Preston →Gay?: misspelling.
• 16:2916:29, 3 October 2012 diff hist 285 Talk:Billy Preston →Gay?

1 October 2012

• 17:1417:14, 1 October 2012 diff hist 0 Neil Connery Repairing very poor grammar ('Scottish retired actor' to 'retired Scottish actor')

30 September 2012

• 22:3722:37, 30 September 2012 diff hist −3 I Was a Teenage Frankenstein →Plot: According to the plot, the boy's face (and presumably, hair, scalp and back of his neck) is stitched on, not the entire head, which would include Bob's brain, not the monster's.
• 18:3118:31, 30 September 2012 diff hist −63 Breakfast at Tiffany's (film) →Portrayal of Mr. Yunioshi: Possibly opinionary, un-cited commentary. Un-encyclopedic.
• 18:2318:23, 30 September 2012 diff hist −73 Barnaby Jones Despite the crossover, the character of Jones did not appear on 'Cannon' until 2 years after 'Barnaby Jones' debuted. By definition, this would no be a "spin off", despite Cannon's appearance on the first episode.
• 06:2206:22, 30 September 2012 diff hist −9 Orgazmo →Cast: None of these appearances constitute "cameos" all received full screen billing and time onscreen.
• 06:0206:02, 30 September 2012 diff hist 12 Gary Clarke He is listed as having 3 sons, but later in entry a daughter (Ava) is mentioned.
• 00:0000:00, 30 September 2012 diff hist 3 The Return of Chef →Plot: She was not simply "overweight" she was morbidly obese.

29 September 2012

• 07:4507:45, 29 September 2012 diff hist 1 BASEketball →BASEketball teams: Teams would be named and referred to as a 'team name', not a "nickname."
• 07:4007:40, 29 September 2012 diff hist −49 BASEketball →Reception: Un-cited claim that this film is a "cult classic:
• 05:0805:08, 29 September 2012 diff hist −1 Ray Harryhausen Subject of entry is American, American spellings are appropriate, not British per Wiki protocol.
• 04:5604:56, 29 September 2012 diff hist 7 Mary Steenburgen →Career: Nicholson himself was the lead with Steenburgen his leading lady. Previous wording inferred that she was star of the film.

28 September 2012

• 19:0619:06, 28 September 2012 diff hist −67 Angel (1984 film) →Behind The Scenes: Deleting opinionary/personal observation ("It has scarcely changed since this film was shot")
• 19:0419:04, 28 September 2012 diff hist −35 Angel (1984 film) →Behind The Scenes: Absurd request for citation to confirm actresses age.
• 19:0319:03, 28 September 2012 diff hist −61 Angel (1984 film) →Sequels: Deleting item that remains un-cited despite long term request for citation. More a matter of personal opinion than relevant fact.
• 18:4718:47, 28 September 2012 diff hist −68 John Ratzenberger →Pixar: Aside mentioning who the producer of the film is has no clear relevance to the subject of the article,
• 18:4518:45, 28 September 2012 diff hist 1 John Ratzenberger →Cheers: Re-wording for clarity, he couldn't literally know that they were not going to cast him.
• 09:2909:29, 28 September 2012 diff hist −130 Who Goes There? →The Thing Envisioned: Review like opinions regarding film's effect on the viewer. Un-encyclopedic/Innapropriate.

27 September 2012

• 07:0207:02, 27 September 2012 diff hist 307 User talk:Kbthompson No edit summary
• 06:1606:16, 27 September 2012 diff hist −6 Tony Moran (actor) →Career: A matter of opinion that his appearance was "brief", blog-like. Un-encyclopedic.
• 06:1306:13, 27 September 2012 diff hist −310 Tony Moran (actor) →Halloween conventions: Deleting very poorly written (to say the least), rambling paragraph which lacks citation.
• 06:0506:05, 27 September 2012 diff hist −26 Tony Moran (actor) →Halloween: Unclear and overly casual wording, vague as to it's meaning ("done few things")
• 06:0306:03, 27 September 2012 diff hist −10 Tony Moran (actor) "being the face of " a masked character? Poorly worded and possibly confusing. Re-written to eliminate vernacular, and to improve clarity/flow.

26 September 2012

• 23:1523:15, 26 September 2012 diff hist −8 Kix (band) →Recent events: Missing the lead singer, the shows were not "reunion shows" given that there was no reunion.
• 20:1220:12, 26 September 2012 diff hist −74 Cristina Galbó No citation for this information, nor does there appear to be any evidence of this at all.
• 18:3118:31, 26 September 2012 diff hist 43 Gender-affirming surgery →History: Re-writing barely understandable, disjointed sounding sentence for clarity/flow.

25 September 2012

• 16:4116:41, 25 September 2012 diff hist 29 Stanisława Walasiewicz →Records: Replacing numerical characters with the proper written ones per rules of grammar.
• 16:3916:39, 25 September 2012 diff hist −34 Stanisława Walasiewicz →Death and controversy: Re-writing shortening, poorly written, confusing sounding run-on sentence for clarity/flow. Previous sentence calls her a 'bystander' and then that she was killed.
• 00:2200:22, 25 September 2012 diff hist 0 Livin' on the Edge →In other media: 'Pakistani' should be capitalized per form.