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1 December 2015
- 21:5521:55, 1 December 2015 diff hist 48 Black dwarf Opening sentence ought to at least mention that we're talking about a type of star here.
14 November 2015
- 00:4100:41, 14 November 2015 diff hist 46 Arguendo These aren't the only areas where it's used and that isn't the only possible phrasing.
6 November 2015
- 05:5805:58, 6 November 2015 diff hist −16 Hero and Heroine →Background: The whole point of this paragraph is that the lineup CHANGED between these two albums.
4 November 2015
- 17:4717:47, 4 November 2015 diff hist 16 Clutching at Straws →Formats and re-issues: Previous wording was momentarily confusing.
2 November 2015
- 10:1910:19, 2 November 2015 diff hist 4 Lovecraftian horror →Themes of Lovecraftian horror: This is not how "unreasonable" is typically used in English; this is my best guess at what was meant and in any case is accurate.
20 October 2015
- 08:4808:48, 20 October 2015 diff hist 213 Talk:2015 Canadian federal election →Notional Gains: new section
11 October 2015
- 04:3904:39, 11 October 2015 diff hist 391 Talk:Bill Rieflin →Nixon?: new section
2 October 2015
- 06:2006:20, 2 October 2015 diff hist 10 Is There Anybody Out There? →Music: No prior mention of who "Gilmour" is in the article, so the full name and link are appropriate here. Removed now-unneeded link later in article.
27 August 2015
- 02:2102:21, 27 August 2015 diff hist −4 1993 Canadian federal election →New Democrats
- 02:1602:16, 27 August 2015 diff hist −1 1993 Canadian federal election →New Democrats: The article just finished saying the NDP did the exact opposite of these things. So presumably this sentence was meant to refer to Barret, not the party as a whole.
26 August 2015
- 21:3721:37, 26 August 2015 diff hist −50 1993 Canadian federal election →Opposition parties: Already mentioned it was the first, no need to mention ones that came after, especially that long after.
6 August 2015
- 03:0003:00, 6 August 2015 diff hist 27 Ipsos-Reid No edit summary
- 02:5902:59, 6 August 2015 diff hist 32 Ipsos-Reid No edit summary
28 July 2015
- 04:3804:38, 28 July 2015 diff hist 15 TJ Dawe No edit summary
7 June 2015
- 00:4600:46, 7 June 2015 diff hist −11 Retraction in academic publishing No edit summary
24 May 2015
- 06:5506:55, 24 May 2015 diff hist 44 List of unreleased songs recorded by Pink Floyd →The Big Spliff
23 May 2015
- 21:1221:12, 23 May 2015 diff hist 0 Alan Moore →The American mainstream and DC Comics: 1983–1988
- 02:2502:25, 23 May 2015 diff hist 10 Have a Cigar →Live: Obviously wouldn't have played it on the recent Wall tours either.
17 May 2015
- 05:3705:37, 17 May 2015 diff hist 20 It's Hard No edit summary
- 05:3505:35, 17 May 2015 diff hist −43 It's Hard Shortened and rearranged a bit more sensibly.
15 May 2015
- 06:2406:24, 15 May 2015 diff hist 28 Conn Smythe Trophy →History: This was written very strangely, for example implying a causal relationship between his winning it in multiple decades and for multiple teams.
30 April 2015
26 April 2015
- 11:5611:56, 26 April 2015 diff hist 3 Canadian English →Spelling and dictionaries: A truck isn't a "part".
10 April 2015
- 23:0923:09, 10 April 2015 diff hist 0 Rain Man This seems like a much more logical place for this paragraph break.
29 March 2015
- 07:4307:43, 29 March 2015 diff hist −1,866 Reductio ad absurdum →Straw man argument: Removed section. No obvious relevance to this article. You can have a straw man that doesn't resemble RAA in any way. Tag: section blanking
18 March 2015
- 21:2821:28, 18 March 2015 diff hist 392 Talk:Doug Wilson (ice hockey) →Recent drama: new section
28 February 2015
- 21:0621:06, 28 February 2015 diff hist −9 Cam Neely →Boston Bruins: already implied by "archetype"
12 January 2015
- 10:3310:33, 12 January 2015 diff hist 666 Talk:Major professional sports leagues in the United States and Canada →Clarification needed (probably minor): new section
10 January 2015
- 07:3407:34, 10 January 2015 diff hist 10 And Now His Watch Is Ended →In the North: This shouldn't be stated as fact, since we learn later in this very episode that it isn't.
28 December 2014
- 07:4007:40, 28 December 2014 diff hist −25 You Win or You Die Found a more succinct way to say this. In any case the commas changed the meaning from what was obviously intended (actually, they made the sentence not make sense at all).
27 December 2014
- 21:5221:52, 27 December 2014 diff hist −21 A Song of Ice and Fire →Character development: Makes more sense WITHOUT the "clarification". If anything, adding a single word like "aspects" here would work, but don't make these sound like separate concepts; that's clearly not what Martin said.
- 04:3904:39, 27 December 2014 diff hist 8 A Golden Crown →In the Vale: Was slightly misleading, could be read as saying she was actively coerced rather than merely compelled by the laws and politics.
24 December 2014
- 08:5508:55, 24 December 2014 diff hist 11 Yes (band) →Fragile, Close to the Edge and Tales from Topographic Oceans (1971–74): Another minor grammatical edit (what's a "shortened single"?).
- 08:5308:53, 24 December 2014 diff hist −1 Yes (band) →Fragile, Close to the Edge and Tales from Topographic Oceans (1971–74): Either this is what was meant, or the "the" earlier in the sentence shouldn't be there.
10 December 2014
26 November 2014
3 November 2014
- 21:0621:06, 3 November 2014 diff hist −4 Godzilla (1954 film) →Plot: Link currently redirects to the general page on the franchise, which doesn't even have a section on this device.
26 October 2014
- 15:3915:39, 26 October 2014 diff hist −11 Yes (band) It's still a top-10, platinum-selling album. Plus, I don't know what "public failure" is even supposed to mean. (If you mean "commercial failure", say that, except in cases like this where it isn't true.)
- 15:3315:33, 26 October 2014 diff hist 26 Yes (band) What does "peaked across the decade" even mean? Replacing wording that doesn't make sense with wording that does.
- 15:2615:26, 26 October 2014 diff hist 861 Talk:Assist (ice hockey) →History, and goalies: new section
13 October 2014
- 20:0520:05, 13 October 2014 diff hist −2 Conn Smythe Trophy →History: small update
1 October 2014
- 21:3621:36, 1 October 2014 diff hist 28 Yes (band) No edit summary
- 21:1121:11, 1 October 2014 diff hist 705 Talk:King Crimson →Needs to be edited for grammar
20 September 2014
- 20:5720:57, 20 September 2014 diff hist 138 Akimbo Alogo No edit summary
11 September 2014
7 August 2014
- 05:0005:00, 7 August 2014 diff hist 0 Nile Rodgers →Formation of CHIC: It's not an acronym or anything like that; it should not be written in all caps.
18 July 2014
- 07:2007:20, 18 July 2014 diff hist 3 Yes (band) →Reformation, 90125 and Big Generator (1982–88): I don't think this version of Asia ever actually got around to playing together.
8 July 2014
- 08:1808:18, 8 July 2014 diff hist −5 Yes (band) Cleaned up some bad prose in the lead. (It's still too long and could use another citation or two, BTW.)
30 June 2014
24 June 2014
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