User contributions for 174.62.68.53

16 February 2015

• 01:4501:45, 16 February 2015 diff hist −43 BandFuse: Rock Legends There's no topic on notability in the Talk page; this appears to be defacing. The rest of the points should be addressed in edits.

26 January 2015

• 00:1000:10, 26 January 2015 diff hist 722 Talk:Jim Inhofe →Environmental issues

25 January 2015

• 22:4022:40, 25 January 2015 diff hist 375 MediaWiki talk:Spam-blacklist →Proposed removals
• 22:3522:35, 25 January 2015 diff hist 410 User talk:174.62.68.53 No edit summary
• 08:2708:27, 25 January 2015 diff hist −45 Valley in the Clouds Bad grammar, unsupported.

24 January 2015

• 05:3205:32, 24 January 2015 diff hist 395 Rapscallion Added the rap group and acapella group. Not sure why there's an article on an acapella group, but ehh.
• 05:1405:14, 24 January 2015 diff hist 106 Talk:Leelah Alcorn No edit summary
• 05:0905:09, 24 January 2015 diff hist 488 Talk:Leelah Alcorn →'faced online harassment': new section
• 05:0305:03, 24 January 2015 diff hist 208 Talk:Leelah Alcorn →"Alcorn's parents were publicly accused of pushing her to suicide"
• 02:4502:45, 24 January 2015 diff hist −192 Los Angeles Times bombing →Background: Biased, non-neutral wording.

6 December 2014

• 00:5800:58, 6 December 2014 diff hist 5 Navy bean →Other white beans: Clumsy grammar

28 November 2014

• 21:5321:53, 28 November 2014 diff hist −2 Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles (disambiguation) →Film: Typo in the bullet indention

27 November 2014

• 03:5203:52, 27 November 2014 diff hist 753 Talk:Killing of Michael Brown →high level grand jury testimony summary from AP
• 03:4503:45, 27 November 2014 diff hist 625 Talk:Killing of Michael Brown →Where is the description of Officer Wilson's weapon and number of rounds?: new section

21 November 2014

• 03:3203:32, 21 November 2014 diff hist 311 Talk:Second Life →Highly Dubious statement in "History" section

18 November 2014

• 07:3507:35, 18 November 2014 diff hist −4 Carly Fiorina →Personal life: Terrible terrible grammar. I only hope this is right.
• 06:5006:50, 18 November 2014 diff hist −111 Carly Fiorina →Senate candidacy: Condensed sentence, too many dependent clauses not really supported in the citation.

5 November 2014

• 17:2817:28, 5 November 2014 diff hist 168 Talk:FTDI →Editing issues on FTDI

4 November 2014

• 19:2619:26, 4 November 2014 diff hist 630 Talk:2006 Santa Cruz Measure K →2014 Business Tax: new section

6 October 2014

• 20:2320:23, 6 October 2014 diff hist 134 Talk:Criticism of Amazon →Amazon Book Collective
• 20:2220:22, 6 October 2014 diff hist 227 Talk:Criticism of Amazon →Amazon Book Collective: new section

17 August 2014

• 00:5100:51, 17 August 2014 diff hist 408 Talk:Real ID Act →State compliance graphic is misleading: new section
• 00:4800:48, 17 August 2014 diff hist 10 Real ID Act Misleading, out of date graphic. Needs replacement. Commented out.

15 July 2014

• 16:0916:09, 15 July 2014 diff hist −49 Straw man Simpler description is better.
• 03:0303:03, 15 July 2014 diff hist 19 Bratwurst No edit summary

11 July 2014

• 08:3508:35, 11 July 2014 diff hist 63 Sound barrier →The sound barrier fades: Grammar, atrocious grammar. I can't fix it all.

21 June 2014

• 18:0318:03, 21 June 2014 diff hist −86 Gelatin →Dietary restrictions and gelatin substitutes: Found another typo.
• 17:5517:55, 21 June 2014 diff hist 1 Gelatin Why was the paragraph break there, anyhow? It cut the topic sentences apart.
• 17:5317:53, 21 June 2014 diff hist −115 Gelatin How exactly would you cite the existence of a company with a practice? Took out marketing language.

17 June 2014

• 15:3715:37, 17 June 2014 diff hist 383 Talk:Migrant worker →US History Section
• 06:3106:31, 17 June 2014 diff hist 366 Talk:Pilgrim of Eternity →References

14 June 2014

• 06:5906:59, 14 June 2014 diff hist 54 James Gang I know, needs citation, but I don't have a citation for the prior. Is it okay to point to a catalog if no print has picked it up?

5 June 2014

• 06:2006:20, 5 June 2014 diff hist −136 SCUM Manifesto Removed repeated sentence, fixed grammar, unsupported frequency claim.

30 May 2014

• 05:0305:03, 30 May 2014 diff hist 0 Leviathan (2012 film) Apparently it's earned more after the reference was made.

16 April 2014

• 00:2400:24, 16 April 2014 diff hist 956 Talk:Erin Pizzey →Citations don't support the statement: new section

23 March 2014

• 06:1106:11, 23 March 2014 diff hist 3 Touch (American TV series) →Recurring cast: I don't know how this got reversed. Did the original writer mean they were launched on an international journey? The phone had already gone around the world at that point.

18 March 2014

• 05:0305:03, 18 March 2014 diff hist 414 Talk:Scientific method →Second paragraph uses 'theory' incorrectly: new section

15 March 2014

• 03:1203:12, 15 March 2014 diff hist 159 N Talk:Pirate metal ←Created page with '==Other bands== Wouldn't Alestorm qualify? ~~~~'

12 March 2014

• 21:5421:54, 12 March 2014 diff hist 323 Talk:New Math →Modern Exercises: new section

1 March 2014

• 13:1413:14, 1 March 2014 diff hist 8 Sexuality of Abraham Lincoln What the heck, this sentence doesn't even tell me what the disagreement was!

5 February 2014

• 05:1305:13, 5 February 2014 diff hist 325 Talk:Roman Polanski →Case current cite 127: new section

1 February 2014

• 06:3906:39, 1 February 2014 diff hist 11 Ultra Soul doh. typo.
• 06:3906:39, 1 February 2014 diff hist 235 Ultra Soul Connection!

24 January 2014

• 03:2403:24, 24 January 2014 diff hist 321 User talk:TJRC →Governor of California
• 03:2203:22, 24 January 2014 diff hist 20 2014 California gubernatorial election Undid revision 592116806 by Tiller54 (talk) We could make an effort to make it better, not just snap war. Please join me on the talk page.
• 03:1703:17, 24 January 2014 diff hist 818 Talk:2014 California gubernatorial election →The Primary
• 03:0703:07, 24 January 2014 diff hist 20 2014 California gubernatorial election Undid revision 592092220 by Tiller54 (talk) Now the depend clause 'even if they secure a majority' is misleading, because the majority of elections in California as secured by a super-majority.
• 02:5702:57, 24 January 2014 diff hist 545 User talk:TJRC →Governor of California: new section

22 January 2014

• 20:0020:00, 22 January 2014 diff hist 75 Governor of California Wiki link to supporting citation. There's a jstor page about this, too.
• 19:5119:51, 22 January 2014 diff hist 92 2014 California gubernatorial election Potentially misleading, additional info.