Talk:Amazon-class frigate (1795)/GA1

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Nominator: Ykraps (talk · contribs) 19:09, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:11, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @Sturmvogel 66:, Are you still hoping to return to this? Regards --Ykraps (talk) 10:47, 27 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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being sank in an action on 13 January Bad grammar and this isn't quite right as she was wrecked after having broken off the engagement. Don't name Droits de Homme in the lede, just that she was a ship of the line.
The lede's too short add something about the prizes taken by the ships or something.
18 pounders hyphenate this as it's a compound adjective modifying long gun and drop the terminal "s".
Spell out 9 pdr with a link, spell out 32 pdr as well
Explain the subsitution of 12 pounders for 9 pounders shown in the infobox
Don't see any real need to detail the third design as Naiad suffices
The Amazon section is too short; add something about the privateers that she captured.
Explain what Santisima Trinidad was and why it was significant
What rank was Samuel Hood?
Link naval architect, captain
You only need to give the city for the publisher's location
The ISBN for James Vol. II is for the reprint. Format it just like Vol. III.
Add an OCLC # for the Indian Forester
You've got several different styles of footnotes, I suggest that you standardize on one.